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for Teddy Bear

by lonewerewolf

person jackie
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG that is sooooo sad. you have got to update soon. sigh Keep up the great work! :)
person Missi
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love this fic and can\'t wait for more!
person amanda
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
is harry and severus ever going to get together or what.
person Shaddow
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude, the writing could really use some work. The speech and actions were very akward and the sentences were just boring to read. The idea is solid and has lots of merit, but that\'s about it.
person mirage
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very OOC on most characters, but good work.
person Hambares
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, poor Harry. Left in his memories all day. Please update again soon!
person DBZVelena
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can you hurry up and get Sevvy to accept Harry already!
person Jaima
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update!
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are one crazy crazy person! But this fic is awesome^_^ I love it^^
person JJ
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yea!!! More story!

What Harry did to Hemlock was funny, but I don\'t see how Dumbledore or Lucius can let him get away with it.
Also, Harry\'s new pet snake would tickle Hagrid to pieces.
Keep up the good work!