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for Teddy Bear

by lonewerewolf

person antipyro
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wolfie,

This story started out really good, with a wonderful opening. After reading Chapter 5, I see that this could develop into something really great. Veela, Harry, scents, mate, not bad looking, long hair, Severus, young, mind changed and pheromones. Makes for some fun times later on.

Could I suggest a teensy little favour, can the chapters be a little longer? Please

Otherwise, just post often and no cliffies. Thanks.
person Cristina
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please up date soon, I love this story!!! Good job!!
person Gwenovere
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Wimper* need more!
This is a cool plot! I have never thought of making Harry a vella.
I hope you update soon!

coolies.
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh i absolutley love it! Great great fic! Please continue and update soon
person Kat Potter
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Can\'t wait for more!
person Marie
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it, keep up the good work.
person Kaitlin
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like when the Malfloy\'s are on the side of the light Lucius is so sexy... Harry faints a lot, he\'s gonna be out like a light when he finds out who his mate is, and did you just suggest that Snape is a submissive? oooh this story is good, please keep with it!
person Rachel
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I did say I love the story, but now you are just teasing us... come on... please, more.

Have mercy on us poor readers.
Up date.
person Dr. Huff-Puff
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don\'t stop here!! Please continue! This is so interesting! First Veela!Harry fic I\'ve ever read!
Good work so far! :D
person morgie
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOOO my god I want moooor