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Wow. I can't say anything else but that.

Twocanz

Finally a darker side of Harry. Slightly brutal but you gotta admit he would need the stress relief. Granted it is never an excuse for rape but you get the point. Nice chapter and even though it has been years if you don't continue it maybe I could hope to capture even an ounce of the feeling you have put into this one. Good job!

that was horrible. the events, not the story itself. you did a good job with it, but i hated it because i hate dark!harry. it sucks. and to do that to neville?? that's just plain mean!~

I admit, I pretty much just clicked on the category to see what kind of Harry/Neville stories there could possibly be. The other was pretty much the random smut I expected, but this one was actually good. ^~^ No second chapter?

I\'m sorry. Normally, I\'m a little more lucid in my reviews, and if I don\'t have anything nice to say I don\'t say anything at all.

I have no problem with anal penetration. I\'ve read fics where Hermione learned a spell that changed her vagina into a penis and proceeded to have her very violent way with Draco. I think what triggered my \'ew\' response was the non-consensual-ness (I know, not a word) of the situation. I apologize for the confusion it may have caused, and hope to have cleared it up for you. Other than that particular aspect, it was well-written, easy to follow, with good spelling and grammar (which is awesome).

Well written. Good grammar and spelling. Original plot. That said...

EW! EWEWEWEWEWEWEWEWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!! YUCK EW GROSS NASTY HORRIBLE ICK ICK ICK GROSSNESS!! I haven\'t read anything else of yours, so I don\'t know what you usually write about, but this isn\'t my favorite story. This Harry is too close to evil for my liking. I\'m not trying to be rude, just honest.

-Kat

Harry killed Neville?!?!? O_O

*coughs8 Well, wasn\'t expecting that---that\'s for sure.

*~* Krazy *~*