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for Sweetest Coma Again

by Elsewhere

schedule December 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is so beautifully well written. A little confusing at first but I love it. The lyrics fit so perfectly.
person lina
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was...*sniff**sniff* it was...oh my god....PERFECT!!!!!!!!!!! *sniff* it really touched me...one of my favorites it has become *sniff*
person Anata
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very bittersweet and melancholy. It\'s so full of emotion, ready to burst and flood. It\'s beautiful. It really, truly is.
This is a style of writing that I don\'t see very often, and it\'s a refreshing, if not cold, change. I say \"cold\" because it\'s not boiling with pure emotionless sex and it\'s not warm and cozy with sap. I\'d say...it\'s in the middle. Like stepping out into the cool air after a hot shower: you\'re not sure if your body loves it or hates it, and that\'s what makes you love it all the more. At least, that\'s how I feel. I can\'t decide if I love the hurt that this piece inspired in me, or if I hate it, but I love the piece itself for being able to inspire the feeling in me at all.
Sorry if that seems a bit poetic or philosophical. Sometimes, I get into moods like that when I\'m tired or am feeling bittersweet. In any case, this was brilliant.
Anata
person thrnbrooke
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is it really enough? He\'s losing himself. Slowly breaking. Does he love Harry as well or is it like he says?
person ura
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice and touching