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for The Easter Bunny

by FatalSuccubus

person AprilOh
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hee, made me giggle.
person kitti
schedule February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i liked it... a lot! it was cute, and the end was perfect!
(although, details abt those hours would have been nice...)
it was adorable!! you shouldn't change it at all...
person Eci_Frog
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"I`m going to fuck my Easter Bunny\"
Loved that part.
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very funny! Good holiday fic ... haha halloween
person antipyro
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great little story.

Suggestion:
-you could have started the bedroom scene very seductively, something about a little bunny tail....?
-maybe a fun game of hide and seek, like in the chocolate eggs being hide, but with Harry and Severus
-the first chocolate eggs hidden should have hummed or something to make Severus find them to stop the annoying noise, or something, maybe a little bell sound?

Just a few thoughts,

Love Harry\'s cheek, write more.
person Leila
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very Cute....Imbecil not imbicil
person Phoenix Black
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"I\'m going to fuck my Easter Bunny.\"

Omg! I love that line! I\'m too lazy to log in. LoL. This was a great fic! Yay for the Easter Bunny! *munching on a caramel filled bunny*
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great!! OMG!! I thought the ending was funny!! MOO!!!
person Subaquatic Owl
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SQueek!
But muh, wow.
Lovely. Poor lucky Harry.
person Lightningbook
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m laughing so hard I\'m crying!