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for Lemon Drops

by PrincessLizzie

person Colene Creevey
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whii ^.^

Snarry smut is love!

Here, have a Chocolate Covered Snape, and a tin of Lemon Drops, for your good work. ^.^
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh GOD!! Yay!!! Lovely, lovely chapter. Loved it! Just please continue soon .. *bangs head on keyboard* Need More Smut ... lol

Loved it! Cant wait for the next chapter - Jessica (( BTW , this is thte same jessica as always, just changed my penname to match other sites ))
person Tasha
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the first eight chapters- this story is just so wacky, crazy, zany, and creepy, but I love it. I really don\'t know what everyone\'s saying. Potter\'s right, lemon drops fix everything. I should know. I gave my little sister one when she had a fever, and it went away in an instant.

last two chapters- it\'s turning into a typical story. NNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! Bring back the craziness. Did Severus really have to burn the lemon drops? That just seemed so harsh. I\'m lovin the Snarry development (I\'m really lovin forceful, give-me-what-I-want Harry.)
person Tasha
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the first eight chapters- this story is just so wacky, crazy, zany, and creepy, but I love it. I really don\'t know what everyone\'s saying. Potter\'s right, lemon drops fix everything. I should know. I gave my little sister one when she had a fever, and it went away in an instant.

last two chapters- it\'s turning into a typical story. NNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! Bring back the craziness. Did Severus really have to burn the lemon drops? That just seemed so harsh. I\'m lovin the Snarry development (I\'m really lovin forceful, give-me-what-I-want Harry.)
person Missi
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don\'t worry-I\'ve been feeding the plot bunnies their lemon drops while you were gone. Thanks so much for the update! I can\'t wait for the smut!
person Lemon Drop Lover
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I cannot believe you got flames! I think your story is funny, original, and well-written. Up-date soon!
person Jademoon
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LEMON DROPS!!!!! Okay, now that I got that out of the way, my poor sleep deprived brain wants to smack both of you for making me laugh so hard. No sleep and this story are not a good combination. So I\'m gonna nap and hopefully there will be more.
And to which ever one that\'s now medicated and sated, sex works wonders for mental stability doesn\'t it?
person antipyro
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The first chapter was really cute. I loved the mocking tone you have Harry use to offer the Lemon Drops - Hilarious.

Now for the other chapters.

Please keep posting
person Hambares
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is perfect Lemon Drop Therapy! I am having a great time reading this fic! Perfect humor and the smut is nice too!
person Kara
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, its so sweet and funny and SLASHY!! I really do like it, and thatnk God its in character, and Severus is completely aware he\'s a nasty bastard without being all gloomy and self-pitying.

There isn\'t really going to be mulitple endings, is there? I don\'t like those. They make me sad on the inside.