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for Lilies on Their Grave

by fearonpenneth

person Satan Blitzkrieg
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!Your story was great and it was so heart warming! I loved it!
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for reviewing it is nice to know that you enjoyed the story. If there is anything you wish to tell me about it that would help it I can be reached by the above email or at fearonpenneth@yahoo.com also. Again thank you for the reviews, it has made my day. I am currently working on another part of this story, it might take a bit but if you want I will let either of you know when it is up.
person Phoenix Black
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg I am still crying! That was so sad! I hate Fudge! *strangles Fudge plushie*
person Aunt Bijou
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet. I can\'t possibly give you constructive criticism just yet, gotta let the glow fade a bit. I will later, though, if you like. Mostly, you need to proofread and tighten up, but the story was so compelling, well, I\'ll have to read it again before I can really find anything to say. So, everything right now is positive. Good, compelling story, believable characters....sniff, sniff... later!! Eeep!