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for Lily Potter and the Time Traveler

by BethPee

person Robbie Byrd
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked how you have Harry & Lily getting together. I can\'t wait to find out what will happen on their date in Hoggsmeade.
person Robbie Byrd
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked how you have Hermione suspect something. And I also liked where Lily & Harry kiss.
person Jeff
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is gonna get seriously weird and I can\'t wait to see what happens.
person Jillian
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You leave us waiting that long.. then you dont even write much.. that was a total disapointment..
person ME!!!
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EVIL EVIL CLIFFIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIILLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL

I WILL GET YOU FOR THIS ONE THOUGH!!!!

YOU JUST UPDATED THAT LITTLE TID BIT SO NO ONE HUNTED YOU DOWN AND MADE YOU DO IT DIDN\'T YOU.....

I WANT A LONGER CHAPTER OR I\'LL TELL EVERYONE WHERE YOU LIVE!!!

I KNOW WHERE YOU LIVE!

I KNOW WHERE YOU SLEEP!

I KNOW WHERE YOU HIDE YOUR MANGA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person SlytherinsWench
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That has the potential for major *squeee*. I can\'t wait. :)
person Jillian
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MAKE MORE GAD DAMN IT!! really, its a really good story, so make more soon.
person Dorian
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So good so far.
person Jillian
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow.. u have got to make more or I will be forced to do unspeakable things..
person Robbie Byrd
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your story. I liked how you introduced Lily to Harry.