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for Lily Potter and the Time Traveler

by BethPee

person brian
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great.
person Anon
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update quick
person SlytherinsWench
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that is sort of squicky...but yet, I can\'t help myself- I need more. It makes me wonder, is Harry his own father? I can\'t wait for the next chapter. Keep \'em coming, babe!
person Axelalx
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It is great so far, I find myself wondering what the concicences of this act were in the past. please in form me.
person Branwen
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When is harry gonna find out he fucked his own mom....really awesome story
person Elizabeth S
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, bum bum bum bum, that was good, needed more in the Harry/ Lily scene but it was still good.....more please?
person Branwen
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the whole lily/harry pairing it is really cool.
please continue writing
person a
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. realism would have been nice. though i\'m sure every mother fantasizes about having sex with her son cause apparently women have completely uncontrollable urges of the most revolting type involving everyone possible.
person Elizabeth Spiegel
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Much better, not a lot more written.....but a lot more accomplished!

I\'m proud, so I will not release your address to the public...yet.....bu-ut


I WANT MORE CHAPPIES SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

person anon
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think Snape should encourage their relationship.
It would be extremely kinky.
In a good way.
Of course.