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for Why Don\'t You Ever Stay?

by lightgoddess

person Lady Sirius
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Noooooooo, not Remus and Snivellus - let him stay with his puppy, please................*gives you big puppydog eyes*
person Joey
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A little constructive criticism... one of the \"afflicted\" not \"inflicted\"

(1)afflicted

adj 1: grievously affected especially by disease [syn: stricken] 2: mentally or physically unfit [syn: impaired]

(2)in
person cdkobasiuk
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now that was very well written. I liked it a lot.

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person destiny black
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great! Loved the whole dogfather thing. Sirius sounds like someone I USED to be married to, that wife beating piece of crap. I hope that Remus and Snape end up together. Is Harry and the others gonna come in soon?