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for Evil Personified

by snapesflower

person Sabrina
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great work. Please update asap.
person Keisha
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Forgive this short review but I\'ve been up all night with my baby.

I ditto everything Anna said.

Love you Snapesflower

Night all, or maybe morning all, but I\'m off to sleep.
person Christine J.
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m thrilled our Severus didn\'t sleep with that nasty slut. He has to save all of his sexual energy for Hermione!!!! LOL

Snapesflower, I love every single one of your stories, and please don\'t even think of changing any of your plots, way of writing or anything because of that evilgrin girl. By the way I wondered if she\'s (Evilgrin) written anything? Somehow I doubt it.

Love the story and please update soon. I can\'t wait till Sev realizes where HG\'s hicky comes from. LOL
person daygonna
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is so sad, i cant belive he acts this way and poor hermione.plz plz plz update again and soon
person dragon34
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great work as always, can\'t wait for another chapter.
person Jakee
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK Sev you were saved by Albus from doing something stupid-now take your blinders off and notice Hermione!!!!

I am happy and hope he doesn\'t mess with the prostitute but I am looking for some hot SS/HG action.


You\'re the vest at the SS/HG lemos we all love. I\'m waiting patiently!

HG and S 4 ever (Sorry slip back to my HG days),

Loving the story
person evilgrin
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi :)
You absolutely misunderstood me.
I think this will be a dull story.
But I never wanted Sev to have that whore.. it was just your subconscious that spoke out.. maybe you want that, hmm? Because I most certainly don\'t! :) What made you think it?!
What I wanted to say with using the word \"dull\" is that after having read all stories of Snapeflower I realized that the actions are always the same.
1.she has a crush on him. more or less, but defenetly .
2.something extraordinary happens which makes them live together.
3.he has a crush on her. and he can\'t resist temptation. Even if he wants to play with her, the play turns against him.
4.the consumation. always the same. even the expressions come back.
5.+/- marriage.
Than again, I don\'t know why I put it to this story, as this is a bit different from the previous ones...
You are a very talented, brilliant author, Snapesflower, and I think you are capable of writing better plots , better stories than these. I think high of you, you are one of my favourite authors. Still I think, you could give a try to be more creative, because your stories start to be ..copies of the previous ones. I love your stories, but I think you are more talented than these stories showes.
person Trisha
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Snapesflower you may not have been offended (bt evilgrin) but I am. Every book, poetry, joke in the world is a formula.

Read a mystery or horror or any book by the same authors-formulas.

The key is to find a fomula fans like.

And Snapesflower has great stories. If you choose to find them formulas-so be it. I happen to find them great stories and hope she continues to write just as she has a long, long time.

Evigrin perhaps you have an \"original\" story you\'d like to share? I doubt it. In the meantime let the rest of us enjoy many more wonderful stories by Snapesflower.
person Beyonce
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I can\'t wait for the SS/HG dance to begin. I\'m so thrilled Severus got away from that hooker. I would have been disappointed if he did anything with her (does that make me a big silliy baby?).

I love all your stories and I\'m going to be bad and give a push for one of my favs \"Fierce Pleasures\". I can wait though as long as you keep writing. I love all your one-shots too.

Maybe I should keep my mouth shut but I do agree with everything that( I think it\'s Anna said). I love the way you write your stories and if they changed I would would be so unhappy.

It\'s like if you read a romance-the hero and herione, will end up together, or if you read Dean Koontz, it\'s a sure bet the animals will be loyal.

All great authors write their books in a certain way or voice, and the ones that are famous, are so because people like the voice that they here from that author. I mean if I read a Dara Joy romance novel and the hero dies at the end-I\'d be pissed.

Your HG/SS stories have a wonderful voice and your plots are always different , so ignore evilgrin (I bet she\'s jealous of you cause she can\'t write). Please don\'t let people like her influence you in any way.

All of your many, many friends love your stories exactly as they are so please keep writing and keep that wonderful \"voice that you have.

I have much respect for you and admiration.

Beyonce (I had that name before the famous one did)!!! LOL
person Jolie
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so thrilled with Chapter 7. You wer brillant having Dumbledore save the day. I am so glad tha that Valencia didn;t get her hands on him Hubnd indeed!

Now let\'s hope Hermioneups the ante and really goes after him.

Great chapter and i know for a fact all your loyal readers gave a sigh of relief.

And my offer stand-if you want me to tell of that idiot Evigirl who obviously has no concept of \"our world\" or your talents-let me at he.

Please no more scares of a sexual nature between SS and other than HG. I couldn\'t take it. LOL