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for Of Love and Jealousy

by Angeline

schedule December 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I know it has been a while but you should definitely continue this. I loved it.
xoxo,
kitkat
person HarryVik
schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked this story, I think it would be more fun if you write some more about their relationship in another chapter. The questions i would like you to answer in this second chapter is mainly; Is Harry a virgin? Do they really have sex that night or just fool around? Maybe Sirius feels anxious about taking Harry's virginity.
Maybe even introduce a side pair for example; Snape/(Neville, Remus, Charlie, Ron...) Or any other pairings. Maybe even throw in a jolly, irritating Albus?? Or you could actually make it a threesome, with the third person coming later.

However this is your story and you can make it anyway you want it. I would however like it if you continued with the story, however you can also leave it as it is.
person Extraho
schedule May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh yes, to be continiued!!!
person Kosh
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is wonderful. I can not wait to read more !
person yamiskoi
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG... THAT WAS SO FUCKING HAWT!! This is defo goin on my recommended readin... OMG... Please write another chapter!! Please, I'm begging you... You gotta continue with the hot yaoi goodness of what you've already started!!
X yamiskoi X
person M
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it!
continue!
person pamma
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more please!!! that was hot!
person Raven
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was fucking amazing!!! Took me a while to find a SB/HP fanfic, I\'m really glad you wrote this! Thank you, it t\'was amazing!!!! more???? please?!?!?
person Vincent
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What do you mean \"to be continued?\"!? it should say must be continued!!!!update now!!!!!!