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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can\'t wait to read the next chapter... luckily it\'s already up. I\'m just commenting on both so you feel special. :)
And I\'m glad u appreciate it when people correct your spelling and grammar, because I have another one for you to fix up (if you can... I don\'t know). Anyway, in the letter at the bottom of the screen, this is one part you have written: \"have been informed about you
And I\'m glad u appreciate it when people correct your spelling and grammar, because I have another one for you to fix up (if you can... I don\'t know). Anyway, in the letter at the bottom of the screen, this is one part you have written: \"have been informed about you
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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Again with the \'you\'re\' instead of \'your\', and you\'ve also got a couple of grammatical errors in there.
I\'m sorry! It feels like I\'m complaining about this story more than praising it! lol
I really love it, though, and pppplllleeeeaaaasssseeee update soon!!!!! *hugs*
I\'m sorry! It feels like I\'m complaining about this story more than praising it! lol
I really love it, though, and pppplllleeeeaaaasssseeee update soon!!!!! *hugs*
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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Um... confusion. LOL. Poor Remmie! Had to be downstairs with the Dursleys all by his lonesome! This is a good story! Update soon!
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January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have a fantastic story going here but some of your grammar errors are really detracting from the quality.
There is a place/ Their is a posessive/ They\'re is a contraction of they are. You also used the word brake(used to stop an object in motion) instead of break (as in to shatter or damage something) It is an awesome story so please don\'t quit just because I complained.
There is a place/ Their is a posessive/ They\'re is a contraction of they are. You also used the word brake(used to stop an object in motion) instead of break (as in to shatter or damage something) It is an awesome story so please don\'t quit just because I complained.
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January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was reading the reviews and noticed someone mention you are Swedish. If you need a beta I will be happy to put you in my cue and look things over for you. I beta for two others currently but neither send me much work. I also do a bit of posting on fanfiction under fragonknight01 if you want to check out my work. Most of my stories have one or two errors in them but there is no one consistant type of error- mostly just rushing to get posted... I shall look forward to the next chapter regardless of what you decide.
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January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.k. new chapter, read the letter and now I find more questions in my brain with regards
your fanfic than answers. However you\'ve got me completely hooked.
Also I apologise did not realize you were Swedish, therefore your English writing is very good, and
just realized I spelt it wrong anyway!!
Update soon please.
your fanfic than answers. However you\'ve got me completely hooked.
Also I apologise did not realize you were Swedish, therefore your English writing is very good, and
just realized I spelt it wrong anyway!!
Update soon please.
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January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I\'m intrigued by your story so far, I can\'t wait to find out more. Poor Harry, imagine what a shock finding out about his \'union\' with Snape must have been. I love the idea of the orb and the power it seems to have to make things happen. Please post more soon.
Hugs
Kat
I\'m intrigued by your story so far, I can\'t wait to find out more. Poor Harry, imagine what a shock finding out about his \'union\' with Snape must have been. I love the idea of the orb and the power it seems to have to make things happen. Please post more soon.
Hugs
Kat
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More please?
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOooooo I\'m on tenterhooks. I\'m assuming the letter is from Bill, but I could be wrong. Can\'t wait for more!
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohh... you do like making me curious, don\'t you??? Really good chapter... only noticed two mistakes: it\'s the Order of the Phoenix, not Fenix, and somewhere towards the end, maybe at the beginning of the second last chapter, you have \"luckily he got his school books with him\" and it\'s meant to be \"luckily, he had his school books with him\"
Sorry about that, but I\'m a bit of a perfectionist. :)
Anyway, please update soon!!!
Sorry about that, but I\'m a bit of a perfectionist. :)
Anyway, please update soon!!!