rate_review Reviews

This story is beautiful and very-well written. Maybe JKR would have written this way if she ever wrots slash :) go on with the story, it\'s incredible. I\'m looking forward chapter 9...

Just wanted to say that I love your story! When I read Chp 8, it just blew me away. Sirius was perfect. The distraught gay teen who\'s in love with someone his parents wont let him have. Absolutely amazing!! Please update soon!!

To Be Continued, that\'s onimous... Oh, well, it means there\'s hope, yet! Please update as soon as freaking possible if you don\'t want to get hurt phyicaly, emotionly, and mentaly.

okay I printed this fic off to read on my spare time and found that as soon as I started i could NOT put it down! The way you write is simply amazing, though very VERY rarely it comes off as a bit corny. Other than that this is PERFECT i absolutely love it...Remus is teh PERFECT submissive and Sirius is so sweet i wanna cry! I cant WAIT till you right more so please please please update soon1 <3<3<3

A+++

*cracks up* A pity James\'s ghost cannot appear to Harry! I would love for Harry to hear that tidbit!

Please write more? It\'s really good!

PLEASE!!! I NEED MORE!!!! This is a very good piece of writing. Remus and Sirius is one of my favorite pairings, along with Remus and Severus^^. I think it need some more fluffy stuff, you know, instead of all this hardcore stuff. Personally, I think young Remus and Sirius would be more tender towards each other, enstead of all this...you know*blush* It\'s good, yes, don\'t take me wrong, I just think they should have a nice, sweet, tender love-making night. Maybe Remus needs to tenderize the homeless Animagus, give him a few loving kisses, tender encouragements, something along those lines. Something SWEET! I like my dose of hardcore, but fluffy-ness is a bit more for the young lovers.

Keep up the good work!!

- Waffle Lynn N.

Your writing, my dear Shogun, is simply exquisite - how I felt for my beloved Sirius at the unholy treatment he received at the hands of his misbegotten family. Your words evoke by turn the greatest pain, or the most delicious love. Not to mention the highest level of eroticism. JK herself could do not better, and probably not as well.

I await your next offering with bated breath.

Those fucking bastards! *looks at Sirius* Go boy!
How did that brat even get the letter?
Anyway... I loved this chapter, even though I wanted to
kill those *growls*. Update soon!

*stares* Umm... that was HOT! *fans self* My sisters were in the room when I was reading this and I had to suck my thumb to keep from moaning. *pause* That sounded so much better in my head.

Anyway, this fic is the best! You have to update soon!