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Keep up the good work!
C_Dog

This is definitely one of my favorite stories.

Its been so long but I still love the story.

Thank God!!! The sexual tension was killing me!! After that chapter I feel like I had sex, lol. That chapter was great I just hope she doesn't freak out. Until next time, I'll be waiting.

yeahhhh ... im soo happy for them .. and i hope sirius does not see them in the nude....~grins~.... i just love you story i cant wait in till your next update in till then ..keep up the awesome work and later for now

angel

*Sighs* Nice chapter. Aww, all this romantic tension is addicting. I definitely enjoy the writing and the pace of the story. And thank goodness you've actually made this more about romance (plot) than a pure smutfess. Not that there is anything wrong with that... ^_^

you do use incorrect grammer sometimes

I noticed that you used 'i seen' instead of saw and i was gonna scream (that is only beacuse i have a friend who says that)

and you said breath instead of breathe


But generally your story is not too bad

More please!!! Really nice story.

Hey, I have been watching this story for awhile, I love it!!! I can't wait to see what happens between them. So far it is hot!! Between you and me, people who fuss about mistakes, have WAY to much time on their hands. This is fun and interesting and entertaining let's not turn it into English report.

Spell checkers and grammar checkers on these new-fangled computers are idiots. I say that really and truly. Sequins, sequence, smequence, ha! You know, my spell checker, every single time, I swear it corrects "Draco Malfoy" to "Drano Malloy." Yeah, like that makes SO much more sense, right? Pbbbbt, Auntie has threatened to reprogram her computer with an axe more than once, because she doesn't want to write about "Hairy Poker" but "Harry Potter." Then there's Draco's father, "Lucious Malloy" and his alter ego, "Lucious Maloney" with his cousin, "Baloney/Bologna/Gorganzola." I don't know where the hell that came from, but I think those folks who write the programs for our checkers either have a very strange and twisted sense of humor, or never read "The Little English Handbook."
By the way, this story is fascinating, and I'm enjoying it greatly (Or I wouldn't have read it this long) and I have long learned to read around spelling mistakes. As long as the story is good, I can live with it. Can't wait for the next installment! More more more!