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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This a great start and it got my attention
Sorry I don't have any ideas for the detention
Sorry I don't have any ideas for the detention
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June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey i relly like your story, please update soon!!
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
..That really sucked....loser!
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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh they\'re both after Harry! Oh this is too funny! I can\'t wait to see how this turns out! Though I\'m rooting for Draco!
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November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hm B+ in english...you know a grade is never what is true? A grade is for school use only. I hate them as you need good grades for college etc but all the same they don\'t prove who you are or what you can or can not do.
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November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A promising beginning, please do continue!
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November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More!!!! You\'ve gotta write more!
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November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oO Not enough actions; characters very out-of-character; very confusing.