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for Spell Master

by Sminty

person Rena
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad your RL is getting better. Hope to see the next chapter soon, but really, considering the tendency in the HP fandom to picture Draco in particular and the Slytherins in general as evil, week-minded idiots, such a great, well-written AND pro-Slytherin story as yours is really worth the wait as long as necessary!
Cheers!^_^
person Kia
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just to say, I enjoyed your story very much! Hope you're able to update soon!
person avihenda
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great fic! I found it yesterday and read it right along the hole day and night until it was 6 in the morning... ups...
not good to read for that long in one go... But the fic was so brilliant I had to know what was comming in the next chapter, and then the next and then the next... completly super good read. A+,5/5, MVG higest grade on any grade system :-) I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter. I can totaly understand that it takes you some time to write the chapters! 40 pages?? wow! I update with like 1-1.5 pages at a time just to keep me going. I'd never get 40 pages out like that. I'm not even at 10 pages, so I'm totaly impressed!
I love the way you've managed to make everyone so belivable and yet feel like they are in character. Loved the idea about a treesom marrage L/N/S that was a really interesting combination. I hope you'll explane the "harry looked like he was dead but was in some kind of dream world" spell. It's intreaged me, but confuses me at the same time. I'm also totaly wondering why harry's magic is so explosive all of a sudden and if it has anything to do with draco and about the bite. Strangely enough, what I keep on wonder is if muses are pack animals or something, if that is why harry whent self destruct when when his "pack" abondond him.
Anyway, great fic. as you can see, I have lots of questions that only more of your lovly chapters can answer, so I hope you write more soon.
person Morria
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yaay!!! responce from the author!!! I hope every thing gets better soon and that you update ... its been so long...
person tessa3
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG.. well after getting off to a bumpy start and prolly pissing off a few friends during my travels... as i come to the end of the road.. i would like to say.. ROCK THE FUCK ON CHICA!!!!!! okay.. normally i would say more but i am now so PRO SLYTH/DRACO that it will sicken my friend girl that's Pro Gryf and Raven... lol.. needless to say.. we debate a lot... but since this fic.. *shakes head* she's taken to ignoring me this evening *sighs* hey i can't help it that i can back my points up *whispers* not to mention that those little slyth tendencies help to *giggles* *clpas hands* BRAVO BRAVO BABYCHAN
person Anon
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love this story please update soon i can't stand cliffies.
person tessa3
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
UGH.. im back.. and i have a headache forming.. *sighs* lord *rubs temples* someone shoot harry.. shit.. i mean come on.. Neville made some good points.. he SHOULD be running Grffyndor but he's not... the 2 most powerful people in the school and Draco.. im sorry i have yet to be giving permission.. Malfoy is running Slytherin.. *shakes head* i am sooo.. hurt .. but lord i have been talking with some fellow Ravens about this fic.. they are looking into reading it later today .. but i was telling them about what i read and comparingit to canon.. they agreed with me that if push come to shove they would side with Slytherins before gryffs. Even if Harry Potter was a friend.. not for the simple fact that there willa laways be an ongoing fued btwn the 2 but the injustices between teh 2. also.. we discuss the reasons behind the gryff and Slth mentalilty... Oh let's not get us wrong.. Hufflepuffs may seem scared shitless the majoirty of the time.. but they have courage and ingenuity of all the hosues.. at elast thats what we all think.. they show loyalty also but not in droves... ya know..anyways... i hope they read this fic so we can discuss more on the nature of the houses.. since this is a Pro Slyth fic.. it will give us an outlook to other houses as welll that are not our own *nodding* *waves...toodles
person tessa3
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! okay so a couple of my friends read your fic.. and we were on AIM discussing it.. and woohooo.. there was such a big freakin fight over it.. i mean... the first few chapters were hard for them to get through they said but damnit.. i open up a can of worms when i said i agreed with what Draco was doing to a certain level... and BAM!!! I got ripped a new hole.. i mean GOD...its a FANFIC... its not canon i say... its for fun.. but they were so pissy... i swear..if you get a pissed off review from someone.. I AM SO SORRY!!!!!! GOMEN NASAI *bows profusely* i deeply am.. i love this fic... and damnit.. its hard to read sometimes but i love it never the less..there are few misplellings here and there but nothing major so until next time.. Ja ne
person acr
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow...such a good fic. I'm a bit confused by Harry's family tree, though. How is he related to TMV? Maybe you could provide a chapter that has both of their family trees listed?
person lilith
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i think that this is BRILLIANT! After reading this, suddenly all my own writings have turned pro-draco...or in some cases when writing BTVS, pro-blonde-in-jeans *grin* i have been looking for an update and am awaiting on the edge of my seat with another 12 friends.
Thank you for the wonderful writings and setting me on the way of the Malfoy :P

hope to read more soon
lilith
xxx