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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Since you asked so nicely;)
I really like your tone throughout the story. It makes the reader feel intimate with the characters and the situations they are in. I also like your side-tracking. Usually that would annoy the hell out of me in most stories, but it works here. Probably has something to do with the way you're tone is so familiar with the reader.
I wish I could give some constructive criticism, but beyond a few word mix-ups and the delay between chapters, I have no issues at all with this story.
You are a fantastic writer! Thanks for sharing your work!
I really like your tone throughout the story. It makes the reader feel intimate with the characters and the situations they are in. I also like your side-tracking. Usually that would annoy the hell out of me in most stories, but it works here. Probably has something to do with the way you're tone is so familiar with the reader.
I wish I could give some constructive criticism, but beyond a few word mix-ups and the delay between chapters, I have no issues at all with this story.
You are a fantastic writer! Thanks for sharing your work!
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Glad you updated! Though I'm sort of hoping Dumbledore isn't dead. Because it would be hysterical if Harry and draco freaked out over nothing.
Also, since Draco has Nalta, harry needs a cool companion/familiar.
Also, since Draco has Nalta, harry needs a cool companion/familiar.
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is totally awesome, I have just sat glued to this story for the last three hours, The twists and turns of the storyline are very cleverly thought out and the characters are brilliantly portrayed,
I have always felt that Dumbledore and most of the other so called good people are hypocritical in the way they treat the Slytharins, in fact they practically drive the young snakes into Voldies clutches.
I look forward to the next chapter
I have always felt that Dumbledore and most of the other so called good people are hypocritical in the way they treat the Slytharins, in fact they practically drive the young snakes into Voldies clutches.
I look forward to the next chapter
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wah! you updated! I*m so happy! :-) I'm so happy I found this fic. It just poped up when you where editing the older chapters and I'm so into it. I was a bit down that you last updated during the summer and figured it was really a dead fic. so imagine how stunned I was when it was updated.
I'm curius to know if anyone els but the snake knowes that harry can phinix :-) that should be somewhat of a chock.
I'm curius to know if anyone els but the snake knowes that harry can phinix :-) that should be somewhat of a chock.
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi
I love your story and I can't wait for you to update it again.
It is perfect and not corny at all and it so perfectly written that any new element that
you add to the story fits like glove and make sense.
thank you
please update soon
Kijo
I love your story and I can't wait for you to update it again.
It is perfect and not corny at all and it so perfectly written that any new element that
you add to the story fits like glove and make sense.
thank you
please update soon
Kijo
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and am very happy that you posted this chapter but I really wish you hadn't stopped right there! I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the chapter in a few days.
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am speachless. This has got to be one of the BEST Harry/Draco stories I have ever read. I absolutely LOVE the way you charactorize Draco and Harry. This story has so many twist and turns that I find myself in a never ending thirst for more of this story! Please update as soon as possible! If you can, please send me a e-mail when you update.
your fan,
rAiNwAtEr
your fan,
rAiNwAtEr
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm very happy to hear that you haven't abandoned this story. This is my absolutely favorite Harry/Draco story ever. I just LOVE IT.
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's nice to know you haven't gone the way of Magnetic Attraction. If you are an author of a fic on Silver Snitch, you should be able to contact the owners of the site by email or through the silver snitch yahoo group. They are allowing authors onto the site to move their fic to the correct site, I think that is what they are doing. You could try that route, to get what you need.
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY glad its non abandoned