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April 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love this story. WE DEMAND MORE D/H! This is great! PLEASE update soon! *salivates*
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April 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi
Very nice, but make sure to get your facts correct before you even start writing a fic
The three-headed dog was Hagrid\'s, and it\'s name was/is Fluffy. Snuffles is Sirius Black\'s name when he is in his animagus form - a huge black dog (mongrel)
There are more things, but I\'m sure if you read the books, you will fihem hem yourself.
Otherwise the language is very good and diversive and the story has a nice flow.
Very nice, but make sure to get your facts correct before you even start writing a fic
The three-headed dog was Hagrid\'s, and it\'s name was/is Fluffy. Snuffles is Sirius Black\'s name when he is in his animagus form - a huge black dog (mongrel)
There are more things, but I\'m sure if you read the books, you will fihem hem yourself.
Otherwise the language is very good and diversive and the story has a nice flow.
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April 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
update as fast as you can please? I\'m really looking forward to read more!^-^
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April 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is awsome! I really can\'t wait for more! Keep upi the good work! And do try to get the next part out ASAP! The suspence is killing me!
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April 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a pretty good storyline, decent characterization, but one thing I can\'t stand is how you always write \"The blonde Slytherin did this\" \"The raven-haired mad thd that\". I think if you tried to avoid some of the fanfic cliche\'s you could be a good writer.
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April 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think black Plague is a crazy stalking fangirl. Beware, little one. Muahahhahaha
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April 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so very much (it\'s the Slytherin in me feeling vindicated that someone is finally telling the story from our side of things... and veela!Draco is just utterly sexy) and it\'s even better after having been re-edited. I was thrilled when I saw that you had updated (on the VeelaInc ML) as I\'d been trying to check every so often to see if there was any new chapters. It was definitely worth the wait and I\'m eagerly looking forward to more. :)
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April 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS SO GOOD! I just sat and read it all in one go. Please update as soon as you can!!
Spoonie.
Spoonie.
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April 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So when are they going to make out?
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April 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Slytherin Rules!!
yeah you\'re right about three different sets of rules applied to students at Hogwarts.
all the Griffindors getting away with their \'planks\', though the way JK Rowling describes some Slytherins makes me wonder how she thinks the kids their age are capable of such deeds. hmm, prejudice and painting of extreme black and white, i\'d say..
great job!
yeah you\'re right about three different sets of rules applied to students at Hogwarts.
all the Griffindors getting away with their \'planks\', though the way JK Rowling describes some Slytherins makes me wonder how she thinks the kids their age are capable of such deeds. hmm, prejudice and painting of extreme black and white, i\'d say..
great job!