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April 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I totally am in love with this story. Everyday I\'ll go to this website (which is in my favorites, under Harry Potter. ^.^) and hope you have updated, and when ever you do, I jump out of my seat and do the happy dance. Then I\'ll seat down to read the *wonderful* new addition.
What drew me into this fic was the fact that you shone light on a whole different side of the Gryffindors, Dumbledore, and Slytherin. With the Gryffindors you showed how they could be cruel, and shun there own /hero/ just because he was the only one Draco didn\'t go after. And I admit I was in the total mind set that Gryffindors were good, but because of this one well written and intriguing story; I\'m looking at them a little differently. I mean, maybe they aren\'t all good and noble.
And I simple love how you kept Draco in character. Most Harry/Draco stories I\'ve read had Draco *so* out of character; that I feel the need to cry. But you hit him right on. (And totally better than I ever could.) It\'s almost like you had birthed Draco from your imagination, and not J.K. Rowling. (And I\'m not just saying that, I mean it.) But to that, you added all this information, Draco\'s \'skin\', to this almost \'skeleton\' Draco (Like the comparison?), so you understood were he was coming from. I think a lot of fanfic authors forget that ason son will not just do somng (ng (like hurt someone, or have sex with someone) without any thoughts, and that Harry and Draco had *detested* each other before.
So, I am in total aw of your writing skills and your characterization. And you deserve all the (good) reviews you get. I can\'t believe you have so many hits, yet only 40 something reviews. So, though I don\'t have an account here, I shall review, also!
I love your Blaise and Nevile. Blaise is so protective of his \"Cherub\", and I think anyone that dated Nevile would be. And your Nevile! *Gasp* I\'m so use to authors putting Nevile down, or not even talking about him. Yet you brought him into the light, and I positively adore you for it!
Your Harry and Draco is wonderful. I give it mad props! I have to bring out again that I love your Draco. But, I also love your Harry. You show that Harry is rather fragile, but not a pushover. ^.^ Kind of how I imagine he would be if he lost his friends.
I have to admit I\'ve never read a Lucius/Severus/Narcissa, but I find it rather...oh, I don\'t know; believable, maybe. I could see it happening. Poor Sev, loosing his daughter. (*sad*) And I love when Lucius and Sev are flirting, and Draco say something like, \"Whoa, I\'m still in the room.\"
So, I bow to your feet. And offer this: If I say I lurve (love) you, would it help your creative juices?
Jenny
P.S.: Props to your Beta, got to love the Betas!
P.P.S.: I recommend \'Magnetic Attraction\' by frizzy. This link is http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1255810 . Enjoy! Oh, the summary is: \"Draco Malfoy is a part veela who\'s just come into his Inheritence he\'s chosen Harry Potter as his mate. How will Harry cope under Draco\'s seduction, especially when he begins to fall in love with the softer side to the boy he used to hate?\" This Draco is no *your* Draco, but it\'s cute. Very cute. Almost gag cute, but not quite.
(I know this was a bit long, but I hope you found it a good read, and helpful in anyway possible.)
What drew me into this fic was the fact that you shone light on a whole different side of the Gryffindors, Dumbledore, and Slytherin. With the Gryffindors you showed how they could be cruel, and shun there own /hero/ just because he was the only one Draco didn\'t go after. And I admit I was in the total mind set that Gryffindors were good, but because of this one well written and intriguing story; I\'m looking at them a little differently. I mean, maybe they aren\'t all good and noble.
And I simple love how you kept Draco in character. Most Harry/Draco stories I\'ve read had Draco *so* out of character; that I feel the need to cry. But you hit him right on. (And totally better than I ever could.) It\'s almost like you had birthed Draco from your imagination, and not J.K. Rowling. (And I\'m not just saying that, I mean it.) But to that, you added all this information, Draco\'s \'skin\', to this almost \'skeleton\' Draco (Like the comparison?), so you understood were he was coming from. I think a lot of fanfic authors forget that ason son will not just do somng (ng (like hurt someone, or have sex with someone) without any thoughts, and that Harry and Draco had *detested* each other before.
So, I am in total aw of your writing skills and your characterization. And you deserve all the (good) reviews you get. I can\'t believe you have so many hits, yet only 40 something reviews. So, though I don\'t have an account here, I shall review, also!
I love your Blaise and Nevile. Blaise is so protective of his \"Cherub\", and I think anyone that dated Nevile would be. And your Nevile! *Gasp* I\'m so use to authors putting Nevile down, or not even talking about him. Yet you brought him into the light, and I positively adore you for it!
Your Harry and Draco is wonderful. I give it mad props! I have to bring out again that I love your Draco. But, I also love your Harry. You show that Harry is rather fragile, but not a pushover. ^.^ Kind of how I imagine he would be if he lost his friends.
I have to admit I\'ve never read a Lucius/Severus/Narcissa, but I find it rather...oh, I don\'t know; believable, maybe. I could see it happening. Poor Sev, loosing his daughter. (*sad*) And I love when Lucius and Sev are flirting, and Draco say something like, \"Whoa, I\'m still in the room.\"
So, I bow to your feet. And offer this: If I say I lurve (love) you, would it help your creative juices?
Jenny
P.S.: Props to your Beta, got to love the Betas!
P.P.S.: I recommend \'Magnetic Attraction\' by frizzy. This link is http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1255810 . Enjoy! Oh, the summary is: \"Draco Malfoy is a part veela who\'s just come into his Inheritence he\'s chosen Harry Potter as his mate. How will Harry cope under Draco\'s seduction, especially when he begins to fall in love with the softer side to the boy he used to hate?\" This Draco is no *your* Draco, but it\'s cute. Very cute. Almost gag cute, but not quite.
(I know this was a bit long, but I hope you found it a good read, and helpful in anyway possible.)
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April 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love you.
I had a sudden urge to re-read this fic again, but it had disappeared from FF.net, so naturally I went searching for it... and had orgasmic fits of pleasure because there were extra chapters and you\'ve updated it! Thank yYou\You\'ve made my day! I love the L/S/N marriage, I adore the Veelan traits, I worship the H/D-ness, I revel in the inner workings of the Slytherin mind, and I can\'t wait to read more. Update soon!
I had a sudden urge to re-read this fic again, but it had disappeared from FF.net, so naturally I went searching for it... and had orgasmic fits of pleasure because there were extra chapters and you\'ve updated it! Thank yYou\You\'ve made my day! I love the L/S/N marriage, I adore the Veelan traits, I worship the H/D-ness, I revel in the inner workings of the Slytherin mind, and I can\'t wait to read more. Update soon!
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April 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
PLZ update da story soon! i love it! keep up da good work! :)
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April 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You updated!!!! I love this fic! Please update soon!
So is Harry going to become as *bad* as Draco now? I hope he do. and beat the crap out of those Gryffindorks! (I\'m a Slytherin and I have to say I found Dumbledore and his *gryffindor-ruled* school to be very sickening.)
PS Please update soon!!!
So is Harry going to become as *bad* as Draco now? I hope he do. and beat the crap out of those Gryffindorks! (I\'m a Slytherin and I have to say I found Dumbledore and his *gryffindor-ruled* school to be very sickening.)
PS Please update soon!!!
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April 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
BabyChan,
This is a fantastic story. I can\'t remember now how I found it (someone\'s suggestion?), but I love it! The way you write Draco and the reasoning behind everyone\'s behaviors is really good. It selikelike you have so many threads in your plot, but you\'ve kept everything untangled and I don\'t think you\'ve lost anything yet. Very, very good. Thanks for writing it.
Now, I\'m anxiusly awaiting more! S
This is a fantastic story. I can\'t remember now how I found it (someone\'s suggestion?), but I love it! The way you write Draco and the reasoning behind everyone\'s behaviors is really good. It selikelike you have so many threads in your plot, but you\'ve kept everything untangled and I don\'t think you\'ve lost anything yet. Very, very good. Thanks for writing it.
Now, I\'m anxiusly awaiting more! S
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April 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
GOOOOOOOOOOD! *grips pillow* I LOVE THIS FIC! You wright more you hear me! You wright MOOE! *E! *starts foaming at the mouth* MORE AS SOON AS P-O-S-S-I-B-L-E!
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April 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ni~ce....do continue....
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April 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This fic is absolutely AWSOME! Just WONDERFUL! I\'ve been reading it for a while now (since it was first on fictionalley.org) and I have to say, this is one of the best Slytherin-view fics out there, if not THE best. I always feel, whenever I read fics, or even the books, that the hypocrisy experienced by Slytherins against them is cruel and unjust, and this fic aligns with my views perfectly. I cant wait ee hee how the rest of it unfolds. Plus, the L/N/S coupling is...wonderful. ^_^
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April 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great, a new chapter, finally! -)
geez, you kept us all waiting and going over the previous chapters again and again! +)
but it was definitely worth all the waiting and nail biting! (done in impatient anticipation ^^;)
i love the \'Veelan Prince\' Draco and how even he finds impossible to resist the pull towards his soul mate.
the Harry here is eh, kinda a sappy cry baby but then the inhumanely cool veela Draco counterbalance it somehow, ^^
they will make the cutest couple ^^*
keep up the great work!!)
geez, you kept us all waiting and going over the previous chapters again and again! +)
but it was definitely worth all the waiting and nail biting! (done in impatient anticipation ^^;)
i love the \'Veelan Prince\' Draco and how even he finds impossible to resist the pull towards his soul mate.
the Harry here is eh, kinda a sappy cry baby but then the inhumanely cool veela Draco counterbalance it somehow, ^^
they will make the cutest couple ^^*
keep up the great work!!)
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April 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i really enjoyed chapter 17.i hope to see next chapter soon.does harry ever find out or understand that dumbledore is never completely honest with him.i wish he would get angry at people for lying to him.i feel bad that all his friends turned their backs on him because he got resorted.i hope he doesn\'t forgive any of them.