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July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Draco always laughs at other\'s misfortunes doesn\'t he? Don\'t you get that that is obnoxious?
Typical Slyth to see what\'s in it for himself.
And I bet Draco\'s totally cruel & obnoxious to Ginny over that debt too!
And even when Ginny is acctually trying to help him Draco has to be an obnoxious prat!
Draco really does nothing to endear himself. I\'ve read plenty of fics that are pro-Slyth that don\'t make him an utter asshole!
Well at least Draco didn\'t do it deliberately, not that anyone would accept that, certainly not Harry.
So he steals Harry\'s wand? Harry has a right to be angry, Draco could have asked & when Harry asked why (which I don\'t doubt he wouldn\'t do) Draco could have calmly stated he goi going to heal himself but Nooooo! He HAS to do it the nasty way!
And then when Harry is acctually CONCERNED Draco has to be nasty again!
And of course, Sev arrives & imediately believes Harry did something to Draco & believes him to be a liar.
And of course Draco\'s nastiness comes out again with his total disregard to Harry.
Now THAT\'s OOC! Lupin would even segest Harry would torture someone? Even Draco? Does the man have no faith in Harry?
And what happened to Harry\'s wand? And why hasn\'t Harry even thought about that when he had it stolen from him by Draco? Sure, Draco was trying to heal himself but you would think after having his wand taken WITHOUT permission (no matter what, Draco did STEAL it!) by someone who is not only an obnoxious jerk but also second on Harry\'s list of people he hates (right after Voldy) Harry would worry about his wand!
Oh, so now he notices!
I think Dumbledore\'s worries are well founded, Draco has shown alot of suport for Voldy\'s ideals so him being the Child of the Equinox would be worrying!
Typical Slyth to see what\'s in it for himself.
And I bet Draco\'s totally cruel & obnoxious to Ginny over that debt too!
And even when Ginny is acctually trying to help him Draco has to be an obnoxious prat!
Draco really does nothing to endear himself. I\'ve read plenty of fics that are pro-Slyth that don\'t make him an utter asshole!
Well at least Draco didn\'t do it deliberately, not that anyone would accept that, certainly not Harry.
So he steals Harry\'s wand? Harry has a right to be angry, Draco could have asked & when Harry asked why (which I don\'t doubt he wouldn\'t do) Draco could have calmly stated he goi going to heal himself but Nooooo! He HAS to do it the nasty way!
And then when Harry is acctually CONCERNED Draco has to be nasty again!
And of course, Sev arrives & imediately believes Harry did something to Draco & believes him to be a liar.
And of course Draco\'s nastiness comes out again with his total disregard to Harry.
Now THAT\'s OOC! Lupin would even segest Harry would torture someone? Even Draco? Does the man have no faith in Harry?
And what happened to Harry\'s wand? And why hasn\'t Harry even thought about that when he had it stolen from him by Draco? Sure, Draco was trying to heal himself but you would think after having his wand taken WITHOUT permission (no matter what, Draco did STEAL it!) by someone who is not only an obnoxious jerk but also second on Harry\'s list of people he hates (right after Voldy) Harry would worry about his wand!
Oh, so now he notices!
I think Dumbledore\'s worries are well founded, Draco has shown alot of suport for Voldy\'s ideals so him being the Child of the Equinox would be worrying!
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July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow.... i\'m speachless... i hope you read these cuz i\'m going to tell you if people don\'t like this story then well they can just go to hell.... cuz this has a great plot and is well written and I can\'t wait for the next chapter.... Keep going. post soon and i\'ll be happy. Jamie :)
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July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
In the aftermath of OotP a fic like this where Sirius has been brutally murdered does not sit well with me, especially since he is a great favourite of mine. I will try to carry on with it though since I have only read the first chapter of it so far.
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July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5:
Heaven only knows how you wouringring them together after that. I would be inclined to think that after everything Draco has done to Harry\'s friends plus Sirius\' murder there would NO way Harry could ever like him. At all.
I carry on in the hopes you have a believable resolution to this.
Heaven only knows how you wouringring them together after that. I would be inclined to think that after everything Draco has done to Harry\'s friends plus Sirius\' murder there would NO way Harry could ever like him. At all.
I carry on in the hopes you have a believable resolution to this.
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July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I made an error in my last review, it was for chapter 4 but my mistake was because of the discrepancy between the the chapter numbers caused by chapter one being in two parts.
Page 6, chapter 5:
Well you manage to really show the anti slytherin bias, particularly on Dumbledore\'s part. The old man probably always has a reason.
So who did set the Fire Pixies loose? Hmm...
I\'m probably going to have to quit reading for the evening since it\'s bed time & I have classes tomorrow & if I don\'t go to bed Mum will harrass me to no end. *Sigh*
Page 6, chapter 5:
Well you manage to really show the anti slytherin bias, particularly on Dumbledore\'s part. The old man probably always has a reason.
So who did set the Fire Pixies loose? Hmm...
I\'m probably going to have to quit reading for the evening since it\'s bed time & I have classes tomorrow & if I don\'t go to bed Mum will harrass me to no end. *Sigh*
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July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love your story and cann\'t wait to read what happens next. Hope you update soon.
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July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely LOVE this fic!!!!!!!!! Eagerly awaiting the new chapter!!!!!! Really wanna knoat\'at\'s going to happen between Harry and Draco....And how Harry overcomes the challenges he faces in Slytherin. Don\'t ask me why,but I have a gut feeling that Harry\'s and o\'so\'s powers and skills are supposed to complement each other, and be used together to defeat Voldemort...at least that\'s what I think. I can\'t help but wonder if there is a prophecy involved??? (But on the other hand, I\'d not be too shocked if I were utterly wrong,though!)
Hope to see the new chapter soon!
Genita
Hope to see the new chapter soon!
Genita
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July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HI!
I love your story. It\'s one of the best stories I\'ve ever read. It\'s amazing, your ideas, style, everything. Just gorgeous. Ive got a lack of words to describe the way I feel about your stroy. I\'m really sorry for that and I can only repeat: I love this story!
Ralna
I love your story. It\'s one of the best stories I\'ve ever read. It\'s amazing, your ideas, style, everything. Just gorgeous. Ive got a lack of words to describe the way I feel about your stroy. I\'m really sorry for that and I can only repeat: I love this story!
Ralna
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July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
If Harry weren\'t so pathetic, I might have thought the story interesting. As is (shrug), what is the point of a conflict between a weakling and an overbearing bafoon?
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July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sorry. wrwordword. I\'m not native to English. Not overbearing, overblown. The relations in the story are way too predictable. (Yawn).