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Page 15: Chapter 14.
Oh Remy! Did you have to? *pouts*
Yes, the prince is self-centred!
Reality has hit!
Well at least Remus disaproves of Dumbledore\'s using Harry. I have never had problems with manipulative!Dumbledore stories.
Ah so my guess of the cause of Siri\'s attempt on Sev was right! Not to mention Lucius was being posessive too.
No, Albus did not handle this well! Putting Harry in Slytherin against his will? Can anyone say Dark Lord Harry in the making?
So Albus was a fool for not having enough forsight. If Harry had been placed in Slytherin alot of the current inter-House ed wed wouldn\'t have existed, Slytherin may not have been as bad as it is at the moment & Harry would be far better off.
So Dumbledore was to blame. I hope he gets torn to shreds for his stupidity. He could have made great strides in redeeming Slytherin but he who is suposed to be so wise blinblinded by his own prejudice therefore ruining everything. Turn Harry against him.
*Snarls* You do NOT know best you stupid old manipulative fart!
Not to mention the unfair treatment they get from everyone else makes them evil.
Well that answers part of Musagets\' thing, he had just as big a dose of Slytherin pureblood prejudice because he was a Slyth!
Oh great exuse Fumbledork, you practically ruin Harry\'s life & then turn it on him by saying he didn\'t ask? You need to go down!

Page 16: Chapter 15.
So his time in Gryffindor had some good effect.
Oooh Harry has just witnessed t-hat-hand the Headmaster\'s anti-Slyth prejudice.
It\'s not like Harry wanted to be resorted into Slytherin.
Oh so both side want to use the bond for their own gain? *Snorts*
Well it\'s not like Harry\'s all to blame, he was manipulated by Fumbledork.

Page 17: Chapter 16.
Harry has so many expectations put on him. He\'s just as opressed as Slytherins are only for almost opposite reasons.
Oh Harry, your tendency to put up with things that are unbearable will bury you!
All the favouritism given to Harry is unfair, the staff is merely making things worse for him by doing it.
Well at least Harry & Neville got some repreive over that test.

I know my reviews are getting shorter, take it well, it means I\'m not jumping on my soapbox as much.

Page 18: Chapter 17.
Again I see that spelling mistake, it\'s \'sense\' not \'since\'.
The bond is having it\'s effect on Draco.

Oh well I never had a problem with Slytherin!Lily, the only thing I wonder is that in a House of people who are so pro-pureblood wouldn\'t a muggleborn be a pariah? It would explain part of Tom Riddle\'sblemblem.

Page 19: Chapter 18.
Well that was enlightening! The pureblood prejudice was to blame for Voldemort! How many past Dark Lords were created by the prejudice? Grindlewald probably was, Voldemort was, Albus worried that Harry could be the next & the irony is Voldemort wants to destroy the purebloods.
*Shakes head*

Well you were lucky with OotP, the dead body was someone you killed off too.
I know, I\'m still a tad bitter, Siri is my favourite. I want to find a stuffed dog so I can name it Padfoot. I ship Harry/Sirius as my first favourite ship (followed by Harry/Voldemort). You can see why I had problems.
On the other hand I do like the fic, even with all the things I object to & the grammatical & spelling problems it\'s still a good story.
*Sighs & heads for the next chapter*

I see you are trying to intergrate some of the OotP factors, bravo but don\'t contradict yourself by adding facts that would otherwise go against the story so far.

Well Draco still seems very against Harry, how will that be resolved?

Hi!!!!!

Sorry, I\'m not very good at reviews... - -\' But I\'ll give it a try!!

First things first; your fic is amaaaaaazing!!!!! I love it!!! I couldn\'t believe when I saw that THAT was the last chapter posted... I almost had a heart atack! MOre like a heart failure, but well. That isn\'t important now.

Your thoughts on how the pureblood are discrimanated and why they are so vicious really explained a lot...

I love how you can make Draco be a demon and still have an angel\'s appearence!!! *sigh* I think I\'m in love with your Draco!!!!

Oh! And please, pl, do, don\'t do like so many writers and change Draco to hush things between Harry and him. It usually makes no sense and people not not only confused but really put-out because of it... The way you are doing is the way to find yourself in the h/d shippers\' hearts.

Just one more thing: don\'t forget to post as fast as you can. Or you are going to regret it, young (I don\'t know if you are a girl or a boy, so you can just imagine Mrs. Weasley talking to the twins as if it was me talking to you, ok? ^_^).


Bye-bye!!!! Keep the good work, please!!!!!


-dmalfoy_fan.

Page 9: Chapter 8.
Your point about the selfrightiousness of Gryffindors is quite right. I can\'t help but feel a bit sour though because Siri has always been a favourite of mine. Snape could not even stand to listen to any proof that Sirius was innocent of the crimes that sent him to Azkaban could he?
As for the first year incident: You have to accept that kids never see all sides of the issue, they are biased. Snape is NASTY to them, they naturally hate him because of THAT. Why was Snape nasty to Harry from the get-go? Because he was James\' son. Did Snape ever stop to think that Harry never knew James? NO! He merely acted as though Harry were a carbon copy of James (WHICH HE IS NOT!) & treated him like dirt. Because of that Harry disliked him & was more inclined to think the worst of him. CHILDREN ARE NOT LOGICAL.
Draco was a stuck-up little snot when Harry met him, even before he knew who Harry was, THAT is what turned Harry against him & as a result against Slytherin. Who is to say that even with the information that Voldy was a Slyth Harry would have asked to be put elsewhere if he had a prospective friend in Draco waiting? Draco\'s racism turned Harry against him & Slytherin.
It was Draco\'s prejudice that turned Harry rioff off & when Harry stood against that prejudice when D off offered his friendship on the train Draco developed a grudge against Harry instead of trying to figure out why Harry turned him down. True, another case of children being illogical but all the less respectable traits were in Draco at the time.
Draco\'s grudge against Harry only got worse over the years & his actions against Harry were nasty & cruelrry rry has alot of justification for hating Draco.
Now I don\'t mind fics that point out the bigotry of Gryffindor but Harry himself has always had plenty of real reasons to hate Slytherins particularly Draco without it being baseless bigotry. In fact Draco & Severus have been guilty of their own bigotry too, just the sort of bigotry you have used in this fics to kill off Sirius.

You say this fic is pro-Slytherin? Could you have possibly done that without being so racist? It\'s a factor of the books themselves that this anti-muggle thing is RACISM!
It\'s just another show of Draco\'s obnoxiousness that he would come out with something like that comment