schedule
October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Come on! Write some more
schedule
October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hi i am stil waiting for the next chapter! lol i cant wait! realy i cant!
kisses xxx
kisses xxx
schedule
October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The action was a little uneven in places but even so, once I started reading it I was completely hooked. I can\'t wait for what happens next
schedule
October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Of course it was worth writing these last parts. They\'re great. Unfortunately, every new parts seems to consist of a cliffhanger, which makes the waiting very very hard. Therefore, please don\'t let us wait for too long, please.
As for Harry... I hope he will finally understand what this vision was about... unfortunately I mistrust his deduction abilities. He seems far too much naive. And I don\'t think Draco will make it easy for him.
As for Harry... I hope he will finally understand what this vision was about... unfortunately I mistrust his deduction abilities. He seems far too much naive. And I don\'t think Draco will make it easy for him.
schedule
October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The last chapters were amazing. I love it.
thank you for that. keep writing!
thank you for that. keep writing!
schedule
October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 22
Oohhhhhh, this is so good/bad. Good because, oooh, love it, bad because, hello! Bad situation currently in. Ooh, how long will it take to get the next chapter out? Because this story isn\'t going to let me sleep, I\'ll be thinking about it on and off for atleast a month, and then after that I\'ll still be thinging about it, just not as much. Tis Good! Liked this ter ter v. much.
~Tris Chandler
Oohhhhhh, this is so good/bad. Good because, oooh, love it, bad because, hello! Bad situation currently in. Ooh, how long will it take to get the next chapter out? Because this story isn\'t going to let me sleep, I\'ll be thinking about it on and off for atleast a month, and then after that I\'ll still be thinging about it, just not as much. Tis Good! Liked this ter ter v. much.
~Tris Chandler
schedule
October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i love your fic, and i can\'t wait till you write more, and i can\'t wait till there some H/D moments
schedule
October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
After much consideration since the last time I read this fic I have come to the conclusion that I just cannot stand this fic. You have said it is pro-slytherin becausu mau make no apologies for how the slyth character act it but as far as I can see it is nothing more than a gryffindor-bashing fest that tears apart two of my most favourite characters (Sirius, Remus) and makes y a y a pitiful weakling.
The idea that the situation between Harry and Draco in this fic could ever come out happily strikes me as so ludicrous that if you were not so sincere it would be laughable. Draco has done so much to everyone that Harry loves that nothing, even the betrothal bond between them, would ever make a sensible person forgive him. If this fic was realistic sure Harry might do the dirty-work for everyone and kill off Voldemort but in the end the underlying hatred between him and Draco would end up will one or both of them dead at the other\'s hand.
I realise that seeing this fic come up in the first couple of pages on the index means you have added at least one new chapter but I cannot bring myself to mire in the horror of this fic again so I will not bother even going to look for the new chapter let alone read it.
My apologies if this statement has offended you or hurt your feelings in any way but I cannot pretend to suport this fic anymore. I have read other plythlytherin fics that do not make the slytherin characters so repugnant yet mamage to keep them strong and in character.
The idea that the situation between Harry and Draco in this fic could ever come out happily strikes me as so ludicrous that if you were not so sincere it would be laughable. Draco has done so much to everyone that Harry loves that nothing, even the betrothal bond between them, would ever make a sensible person forgive him. If this fic was realistic sure Harry might do the dirty-work for everyone and kill off Voldemort but in the end the underlying hatred between him and Draco would end up will one or both of them dead at the other\'s hand.
I realise that seeing this fic come up in the first couple of pages on the index means you have added at least one new chapter but I cannot bring myself to mire in the horror of this fic again so I will not bother even going to look for the new chapter let alone read it.
My apologies if this statement has offended you or hurt your feelings in any way but I cannot pretend to suport this fic anymore. I have read other plythlytherin fics that do not make the slytherin characters so repugnant yet mamage to keep them strong and in character.
schedule
October 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Interesting! You have such a rich imagination; I can\'t wait to see what you come up with next!
schedule
September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hi! omg u r such a gud writer!!! are you a proffessional writer? u r sooooooo gud! this is fantastic story, i just hope you can hurry up with the next chapter ok weljoy joy your praise :D
higy xxx
higy xxx