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for Spell Master

by Sminty

person Fairyangel863
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is the BEST story ever!! I have fallen in love with your versions of Harry and Draco! The Snape-Malfoy 3way mariage is also a bonus! ^_^ Please PLEASE post the next chapter soon!! I just cant wait to see what happens when Draco and Harry are REALLY together! They have taken the first official step towards each other but they still have a ways to go. Again this is the BEST STORY EVER!!! You just have to update it soon!!
person thamodis
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
First of all, I\'d like to say that I\'m really enjoying your story. The plot is interesting...however, there are a couple of things that sort of jumped out as problems to me. You might want to be careful not to make Draco too powerful, because that makes the story seem more and more unlikely. Next, there are some spelling and word choice errors, i.e. using Perfect rather than the correct term, Prefect, throughout the fic. Just thought you might want to know.

Anyway, I think you are still writing an interesting story, and I hope you continue to do so!
person taggurit
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow i havent read this story in a really long time...i had started on fanfiction.net a long time ago but never went to far (it made me to depressed) i mean its taking harry and draco FOREVER to get together...but i saw you again here and thought why not? and i\'m glad i did its gottin really good. i can\'t wait to read more
person higapox
schedule December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hi i hope you are going to update soon.
hope everythings alrite with you.
update soon.
luv higy
person JO_T
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I figured I would leave a note saying that I liked your story. Cept the whole het in there. lol. eeewwww. hee hee, I am a slash lover. Though I don\'t usually read Draco and Harry fics this one is worth reading. Though you got me confused with them saying Vanity is dead and then talking like she is alive just hidden. Or maybe I am juotalotally confused and am reading things wrong.
person Anna Malfoy
schedule December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi, this fic really made me rethink the whole *Slytherins are all evil*thing which is rather prominent in canon, and that I now find very unrealistic - a whole House can\'t be \'bad\' and it\'s probably \'ause the other Houses treat them like they do. Also,I love the Veela-world you\'ve created, it\'s so beautiful and unscrupulous. The fact that Gryffindor turned on HArry and Neville is also very darkly realistic, look at how they coldshouldered them in PS/SS. And Ron - well, noone is so cheerfule ise is in the canon, so it stands to reason that he has many more darker sides then what would be apparent at first. The only thing I actvely didn\'t like about this fic was that Hermione was so yielding when it came to Ron\'s and Harry\'s enmity (itis now), I just can\'t see her go along with something like that happening to her friend. The SNape/Lucius/Narcissa pairing was a new one but it fitted in so very well and I really liked - despite the het that automatically follows. And finally - Draco has realised a few things about Harry and himself!! More smut soon!! CHeers Greenie
person Felicia
schedule December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Is it hot in here, or is it just me?! You write one of the most exciting stories I\'ve ever read, and I\'ve read it a *cough* couple of times...:) What can I say - it is a riveting story!
Which is why I have to say this: M O R E !!!!!!!!!!!
*Please*?
Felicia :)
person Anon
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
gooooooooood
person Brenna
schedule December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. I just fied red reading it from the start and it\'s wrfulrfully inventive and highly original. Is there anyway that I can please be notified when you update (with a link) so I may continue to enjoy your fine crafting of this tale?

Brenna
person kristin
schedule November 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love the story line, i love the story, i lohe che chappies.

I would love to have dumbldork\'s plan backfire in his face, and in the end have Harry choose Draco, over the self serving people that put him here in the first place...