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for Spell Master

by Sminty

person Ralna Malfoy
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*aaaaaaaargh* when do you want to update?????

pleeeeeease! I need more this instant... *starts crying*

*stumbles away*
person Sky
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW i just love yur story! it is wonderful and i cant wait for you to put out more chapters. keep up the great work:)
sky
person Liz
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HEY! What\'s up? Why no update? I check on this story every time I\'m on the computer and there hasn\'t been an update since forever. I hope everything\'s okay. You have a great talent, it would suck if something was keeping you from it (BOY I sound cheezy). I\'ve been following your story since it was on Fanfiction and I can honestly say that your storyis the best story I\'ve ever read from the internet (and believe me, I\'ve read a WHOLE hell of a lot). I recommened you to a friend of mine who also likes D/H and she loves it as well. Pleez don\'t stop writing, PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZZZZZZZZZZ!!!! Li
person Aiko
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pleeeease, post the next part soon \'cause i really love the fic and i want to know what
person Briel
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE!!! I\'ve reread this fic SIX times. It\'s so damn good.
person Moeko
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM


PLEASE!!! Give us some more~!! Grant us some reprieve!!!

Get on with the story. *sobs*
person Ashanka
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy the fact that Harry shows his real power and that the slash begins...I really like your story and I can\'t wait to read the next chapter... pleeeaassee uptade soon!
person SandraM
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to finish this? I\'m patiently waiting.
person starchild
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi,

just wanted to say how much I just love this fic. It\'s true. I come to adultfic everyday just to it yit you have updated, so you could say I am disappointed alot, but that\'s not true I end up just re-reading what you have written over and over again and I can\'t wait for the next installment.

I love the characterisations. I love how Draco is tender with Harry but still an ass. I was a little afraid at the beginning that you were going wimp out Harry, but you didn\'t he still has a backbone, and I love that he still is formidable.

I\'m ambivalent about Sirio tho that end does not bother me, but I like how you show that Dumbledore is a manipulative git. He does it for the right reasons, but that does not change who and what he is.

Loving the Snape+Malfoy love, totally head over heels for the Longbottom+Blaise connection. Whew, just had to write to let you know that I totally enjoy your take on the Harry Potter Universe and I can\'t wait for more.
person ging
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just reread this and it is as lovely as before. I would please, like for you to continue work on this piece. I have enjoyed your work and your portrayal of draco here. I particularly like your take on bias and bigotry towards slytherine in this work. I think its an angle that needs exploring in fanfic. I also like the angle you are taking with Salazar\'s Portrait-- rather Neville-ish, I think, hmmm?? So please don\'t leave me hanging like this and wanted to let you know your work is truely appreciated. Ging.

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