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August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say keep up th good work. i enjoy ur story a lot, it\'s got a really good plot going and i can\'t wait for the next chapter, like really i can\'t wait.
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July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Let me just say this first, YOUR STORY IS AWSOME!!! I love the way you stick up for Slytherine, and aren\'t afraid to show what true Gryffingors are like. The the way you captured their personalities is too cool. Hurry and write the next chapter, I need a good story to read! lol
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July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Three chapters!!! You made my week. Hell, you probably made my month. Your update made me even more happy than I was when I passed my entrance exam to university last week (hmm... now that is slightly disconcerting...). Anyway, your story is brilliant. I\'ve already said it a few times in my reviews but I don\'t think it\'s so bad repeating yourself as long as you repeat pleasant things.
Now I\'m waiting for that detailed explanation of Slytherins\' magical bloodlines you promised iur nur notes - well, at least I hope it will be detailed. I\'m quite curious about that. Could you finally tell what magical creature Blaise is? Or perhaps you wrote about it somewhere already and I missed it?
Two more things need some explaining, too. One, how did it happen that Potter couldn\'t do wandless magic at beg beginning of September and barely a month later he\'s quite skilled at it. Two, I\'m rather confused about the timeline. Did Voldemort meet Draco\'s great dfatdfather at school? How old is your Volde? Pe? Perhaps your story simply doesn\'t stick to the canon at this paticular point? Could you please make these two matters clear? I\'d be obliged.
I\'m sorry that I\'m picking at the details here. It\' just that I want my favourite story to be perfect.
Now I\'m waiting for that detailed explanation of Slytherins\' magical bloodlines you promised iur nur notes - well, at least I hope it will be detailed. I\'m quite curious about that. Could you finally tell what magical creature Blaise is? Or perhaps you wrote about it somewhere already and I missed it?
Two more things need some explaining, too. One, how did it happen that Potter couldn\'t do wandless magic at beg beginning of September and barely a month later he\'s quite skilled at it. Two, I\'m rather confused about the timeline. Did Voldemort meet Draco\'s great dfatdfather at school? How old is your Volde? Pe? Perhaps your story simply doesn\'t stick to the canon at this paticular point? Could you please make these two matters clear? I\'d be obliged.
I\'m sorry that I\'m picking at the details here. It\' just that I want my favourite story to be perfect.
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your fic. I\'d just like to get that said. :)
Would you like a beta reader?
I could catch such things as dieing vs dying and parcelmouth vs parselmouth...
I\'d be willing to do it if you want me to.
Briel
Would you like a beta reader?
I could catch such things as dieing vs dying and parcelmouth vs parselmouth...
I\'d be willing to do it if you want me to.
Briel
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July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay!
Happiness is in the details :)
Happiness is in the details :)
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July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooo, it looks like the plot is thikening. Can\'t wait for the next chapter. I can\'t wait for Draco to find out that Hermione has a \'red\' hand! And that he has a jeenie bottal.
The guilt thing with Dumbledor is good . . . but what else is he hiding for Harry? Maybe it has something to do with Harry\'s family tree . . . again. I hope a little more is answered in the next chapter.
By the way, What happened to the \"Diary\"?
The guilt thing with Dumbledor is good . . . but what else is he hiding for Harry? Maybe it has something to do with Harry\'s family tree . . . again. I hope a little more is answered in the next chapter.
By the way, What happened to the \"Diary\"?
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July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooo, it looks like the plot is thikening. Can\'t wait for the next chapter. I can\'t wait for Draco to find out that Hermione has a \'red\' hand! And that he has a jeenie bottal.
The guilt thing with Dumbledor is good . . . but what else is he hiding for Harry? Maybe it has something to do with Harry\'s family tree . . . again. I hope a little more is answered in the next chapter.
By the way, What happened to the \"Diary\"?
The guilt thing with Dumbledor is good . . . but what else is he hiding for Harry? Maybe it has something to do with Harry\'s family tree . . . again. I hope a little more is answered in the next chapter.
By the way, What happened to the \"Diary\"?
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July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, keep up the good work!
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June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is one of my fav fics. totallve hve harry and draco. and i\'m glad to see the gryffindors, slytherins, and ESPECIALLY hermione, ron, and dumbledore as they truly are. hope you post again soon, and keep up the great work.
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June 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I did go and cut and paste your story, (only because it was so good, mind you) *shamefaceeforefore you gave permission. :(
No really, I love it! Draco\'s such a hormonal bastard! It\'s soooo good. I could go on raving for an hour, it\'s that good. I have no suggestions, except to continue it rightil til the end. Keep on doin\' what you\'re doin\', it\'s magic!
Luv,
~Sharade
No really, I love it! Draco\'s such a hormonal bastard! It\'s soooo good. I could go on raving for an hour, it\'s that good. I have no suggestions, except to continue it rightil til the end. Keep on doin\' what you\'re doin\', it\'s magic!
Luv,
~Sharade