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im so glad your muse came back. I was definitely hanging in suspense there. I like the way it\'s going, but i do have one comment. The phrases \"what have you been smoking\" and \"asshat\", though fit for the situation, doesnt exactly mix well with Harry Potter. It kind of takes away from the British-ness that is Harry Potter. Those phrases are really American. Your story would look more professional (for lack of a better word) if you stuch to British slang. I only write this because i love your story and i want to be helpful. I can\'t wait fo rthe next chapter. :)

You have set up so diametrically opposed boys--Harry wants love not sex and Draco wants sex not love. I think I need to re-read your story because I am uncertain about how Harry marked Draco. Still, I enjoyed the gossipy Neville. It is such a unique and sweet characterization of him. It\'s also hard to read how isolated Harry is even with Neville as his friend (and Blaise glaring daggers at Harry). I keep hoping for more carryover of the connection made with Draco during the incident in his room. However, I\'m sure you have a plan for that as well. I look forward to more.

This is very good. i can\'t wait for more. i love the idea of Draco being innoncent and needing harry\'s wisdom of the world. i hope you update soon

Great story, a bit long but worth every pageJ. Still, sometimes when u want to show how powerful or affectionate the snakes can be, I think, u get a bit out of it, like

GAH!!!!! I was just recommended this story and read it all in two days! (And I mean reading that is non-stop, clinging to the monitor, time stops, absolutly no work gets done, 8 hour stints in my computer c, my, my ass is tired...reading!) Phew! What a completely facinating mind you have!!! ('Shadow' - pink haired -nightmare creatures; the vampire history - muggles vs. wizards; and vella magic... I am just in awe!) Sirius a rapist; sweet Neville as an adored cherub to Blaise (awh!) Ron as a big time jerk! Hermione... the do gooder. Harry the emotional basket case finally finding out about his family and getting his power. On that note I have to say that I noticed that Haalsoalso came into his power after he bite Draco...Right? AND of course... Draco...My bad ass Draco! How can one Not like your kick ass Draco? Yum, yum, yum! OH! I can only give you lots of praise and send large amounts of love and gratitude your way. Such a faciniating story must go on...it must be written...for the good of the - earth - or - humanity...or something like that! Please continute to write. ( PS I apologize for not reviewing each chapter! I was just so engulfed that I had to save it all for the end. I promise to review for everyone after this one! *wink*)

*gasps* NO! Come back! I want to know about Harry's family! Please please please update soon. I love your style, and the characterizations are wonderful. It's also a believeable series of events, so thank you for not skimping on the important details.

i find your story spellmaster the best fanfiction ever written about harry potter your veiws are new and thrilling and i cannot wait to see more of your written work, considering you say that this is your first -- jeanne 2525
ps cannot wait find out what will happen next

I absolutely love this fic! When are you going to update? i'm dying here!

You suck! I mean you REALLY suck! You suck like a porn star!
Don't get me wrong, I love Draco and all but man is he off charater. In fact, THEY ALL ARE!! I realize that in any FF the charaters are going to be off to some dagree, but you've brought it up to a whole new level! I'm not even sure I'm still reading a Harry Potter FF. Yeah, It's that bad.

Has anyone else noticed a the sudden disapears of a Ms. Luna Lovegood, Ginny weasly, and Cho Chang? I have!
And if the Malfoys are supposed to leave airs

And the PLOT!! Good Lord have mercy! That's even worse. Its just to unreal. I know it's not real but it is lacking any sort of logic or stability.
(your fiction has too much fiction.)(I LOVE fiction! but that was over the top done poorly.

But you get pionts for trying. I can't believe it but you've some how put TOO MUCH effort into this! Yeah, yeah, I know.

Were was I? Oh yes...YOUR STORY

Wow!
This is getting interesting. I can't wait to know what will happen next