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July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
looks like we have been abandoned! Really sad caused I liked this story. Must have gave up. Maybe we'll get someone else to finish. Someone know how to contact the author? Maybe they can give us a summary of how the fic was supposed to end
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May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.O i want more! need more! this story is just too good to leave here. please, please, please continue! and lemme know when ya update ^^
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April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*chants* Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update!
Please. Be so kind to add something more. There's a talk with a wolf to be had. Please!!! *begs on knees*
Please. Be so kind to add something more. There's a talk with a wolf to be had. Please!!! *begs on knees*
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February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9: After reading your note at the end of this chapter (which I mostly agree with, btw), I have to wonder why you have Harry - who should have been a Slytherin - appearing so weak? He actually comes off as being weaker than Neville!
You're right: I'm starting to become a bit perturbed with the way you portray Harry.
You're right: I'm starting to become a bit perturbed with the way you portray Harry.
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February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh-kay. You just insulted my intelligence for the last time. Harry - only *barely* passing DADA? Ta-ta, dearie.
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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter one: "up most" should be "utmost"
"reared breathless" should be "rendered breathless"
"rapped" should be "wrapped"
And the chapter could use a good proof-reading for other, incidental errors.
Personal opinion? Although I can see Draco being vengeful, I do think you took it 'way over the top. I'm hoping in upcoming chapters that you show what caused him to be so vicious.
"reared breathless" should be "rendered breathless"
"rapped" should be "wrapped"
And the chapter could use a good proof-reading for other, incidental errors.
Personal opinion? Although I can see Draco being vengeful, I do think you took it 'way over the top. I'm hoping in upcoming chapters that you show what caused him to be so vicious.
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January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
do not give up yhis fic or AFF!!!
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This has got to be one of the BEST Harry/Draco stories I have ever read. Please update soon, I don't know how long I can take the suspence. I was so happy when you updated back in October. I started checking every few days to see if you had added additonal updates. I really hope you update again soon. I really enjoy this story. Thank You, Oderint dum metuant
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohh i love it poor harry being betrayed by lupin. bad lupin >_<
plz update this soon plz
luv ice witch
plz update this soon plz
luv ice witch
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
god this is so good. and woefully incomplete. im still waiting for that kiss!! hope all is well! in that last note you seemed surprised it was on aff. is it posted somewhere else as well?