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I am a huge pro-slytherin fan and love the stories that focus on their house and the way the rest of the school treats them. This story satisfyes that portion of me and extended on forever. I LOVE the idea of having most of the Slytherins be \'non-humans\' or at least only part. I love how you made this gothic and dark, making wonderful reasoning for their \'devotion\' for Voldemort. I also like how you don\'t take away from Draco\'s snobbishness, but add to it, but in a way that makes you like him all the more.
I also adore your flashbacks to the year before. It\'s as if you wrote that whole year and knew exactly how each bit fit in. I like how you explain draco\'s hatred for muggles. The whole desease thing. That is absolutely marvolous. An understandable phobia in that situation. I can read and reread this over and over and still get thrills at all the great bits. Like in one of your earlier flashback sequences when Dumbledore took away the House Cup from the Slytherins. Draco stood up and said, \"Hypocrasy, thy name is Gryffindor\" ^^!!! Then they walk out. Fabulous. I also adore the three-way marriage..and...and..damn, this whole thing is a masterpiece.
I have absolutely no clue where you are going next. And it\'s driving me nuts. Your characters are wonderful characterized and humorus in a slightly dark way. This is, possibly, the best fic I\'ve read. I truely, honest, with every part of my being, hope you will continue soon. I hope you will never discontinue this, because it will be a great loss to the fanfiction world.

This is really well written. I love Harry and Draco as a couple, though I am rather curious about Harry\'s heritage is. Since the Potters were a \"pure\" family until James\' marriage to Lily, does that mean that Harry has magical creature blood as well? I can\'t wait for your next update. Do you happen to have a notification list or anything like that? The only thing I don\'t like about AFF is that it is such a pain to find out if the WIP you\'re reading has been updated.

Anyway if you have an update list I\'d really appreciate being added to it. My e-mail is jasminerin@yahoo.com

Excellent job!

I love this story!! The plot is completely different from the many other fics i have read about HP. thanx for writing it and please update soon

Thanks for the update! I was a little leery of Harry\'s extreme joy at the broom but I think it all worked in the end. Malfoy is devious and I adore it about him, using Lily to get Harry was brilliant.

The ending with Hermione and Ginny was well done and believable. I can only truly see Ron\'s anger in most fic stories because he exhibits it so much in the books, but Hermione never catches me as being the ruthless angry person many authors portray her as. You did good with this and I\'m looking forward to seeing what you do with it.

Anyway, great update and thanks!

I love your story. I have waited on edge at times several months because I enjoy your writting. out of sheer curiosity I checked out what other people had to say about his. I found these two responses that were just over the top in my opinion.

Dragon Master Sneere 2004-09-24 id # 288489
You suck! I mean you REALLY suck! You suck like a porn star!
Don\'t get me wrong, I love Draco and all but man is he off charater. In fact, THEY ALL ARE!! I realize that in any FF the charaters are going to be off to some dagree, but you\'ve brought it up to a whole new level! I\'m not even sure I\'m still reading a Harry Potter FF. Yeah, It\'s that bad.

Has anyone else noticed a the sudden disapears of a Ms. Luna Lovegood, Ginny weasly, and Cho Chang? I have!
And if the Malfoys are supposed to leave airs

And the PLOT!! Good Lord have mercy! That\'s even worse. Its just to unreal. I know it\'s not real but it is lacking any sort of logic or stability.
(your fiction has too much fiction.)(I LOVE fiction! but that was over the top done poorly.

But you get pionts for trying. I can\'t believe it but you\'ve some how put TOO MUCH effort into this! Yeah, yeah, I know.

Were was I? Oh yes...YOUR STORY

-Amy\'s response-
It\'s written clearly in the first chapter that this is a pro-slytherin fan fiction. As such the writter would be developing a secondary character that Rowling hasn\'t given detailed background in. Again with where are these characters. It\'s a pro slytherin fic. If it\'s not needed, why would you write in characters that are not needed. Just because Rowling does? No, that\'s becuase it\'s a fanfiction. As for your coment on the plot. I would like to point out that the writer (love her) has pointed out some very good points and ideas that have made many of us think a bit more concerning the original books. Like pure blood meaning purely magical not just pure witch or wizard. Besides, I\'d like to think that this is leaps above the whole Mpreg fics out there. As for the author putting too much effort into the fic. You have to be out of your mind. She has great detail and I wouldn\'t be surprised if she\'s currently trying to write her own novel.

so STFU.


S.N. lotus@mnet.bg 2004-11-01 id # 304290
Great story, a bit long but worth every pageJ. Still, sometimes when u want to show how powerful or affectionate the snakes can be, I think, u get a bit out of it, like

It\'s never hard to read this story! I\'m just so surprised at another update so soon. >_< thanks for writting so well!

God\'s I\'m so glad you\'re finally updating again. :) I missed this story and \'ve looked out for updates every day. :) To think that I\'d nearly missed them... *shakes head* And as wonderfully written as ever. :):):) Please can we hope for more updates in the near future. I hardly can wait. :)

I really LOVE this fic of yours and i can\'t wait to read what will happen now that Harry is the new Slytherin seeker.

That plotting Draco Malfoy. He always seems to get his way and circumvent things sent his way. I loved how he got Harry on the Slytherin Quidditch team. And with such a fabulous broom! Poor Harry--the story behind losing his broom is a sad one, one I can understand after how he was treated by Sirius. And I loved his smile--and Hermione\'s plotting--that was a revelation. Nicely done chapter full of surprises!

Oh, I hate hermione >.< I hate her so much!! But I\'m glad Harry is playing seeker ^_^ and that somehow this complex Draco - Harry... thing ^^\'\' is beginning to go somewhere ^o^