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wow! this is such an amazing story! i was searching sites for your screen name --> babychan
cuz i wan\'t to read other works from you besides your series about clark and lex and their kids (and i\'m hoping to read the sequel soon where the kids meet grandpa kent and lex concot his vengence for making his clark cry) and this is now another story i\'ll be anxiously awaiting updates for :)
i love this story and can\'t wait for the next part where we find out about harry\'s family tree....and how he bit and placed that scar on draco....is he non-human too? so many questions! hope to read more from you soon :D

DAMN YOU AND YOUR Cliffhangers!

Though, I love your stories. They\'re one of the few stories I read where Harry befriends Dumbledore and such. I\'m on my toes about the family tree, PLEASE LET LILY BE A DESCANDANT OF SALAZAR SLYTHERIN or PUREBLOOD! Oh, and a suggesstion? I hope later in the story Harry\'s more mature, rich, mature and powerful.

<<33 LOVE YOUR STORIES! THEY\'RE THE BEST STORIES!

Hi! Nice to have you back, there are not enough good Pro-Slytherin fics and yours is one of the best!^_^
I absolutely love how you wrote the scene with usually apathetic Nott and his *VERY* un-apathetic reactions on HIS (!) interpritation of Harry and Draco\'s quite innocent conversation, it\'s hilarious!^_^_^

BTW, it would be nice to see Draco\'s reaction on the lies Harry was told about his parents by his muggle relatives, I mean, he knows Harry isn\'t aware about his bloodline, but I highly doubt, that he *really* understand, just *HOW* unaware Harry was.
Besides, considering, that Draco would be translate Harry\'s family tree, his interest wouldn\'t be off-topic.

P. S. And spineless Remus, who is *so sorry* (or, at least, he says so) are still betraying Harry - he knows about Harry\'s arranged marrige, knows, that Dumbledore is going to use it and... Right, says nothing. Suppuse, he would admit only lies Harry would find out him in?

Hope, this time you\'ll update sooner.
Cheers!

Hello! I\'ve been on this fic for the last week since I found its existence, and it being a first fic is hard to believe. You\'re brave (even if that\'s \'Gryffindor\') for continuing to add those long chapters, I know I haven\'t finished most of MY WIPs. I hadn\'t read D/H for a long time and the couple is now brought bak into my heart :P Oh, and I LOVE how Nott is and his reactions in the last chapters; actually I really enjoy all the laughs I\'ve had because of the fic. You created something fantastic, with the N/B, the 3 ways marriage, Draco\'s personnality... I\'ll be waiting for the next chapters (and the \'translating the family tre in Malfoy\'s room\' part) Hugs!

Well, this story doesn\'t lack in originality. It\'s got some pretty unique ideas, and I liked the fact that you expanded the HP universe and made it entirely your own. However, it doesn\'t really have much in the way of realism, and some of the characters are rather OOC. It\'s got the potential to be brilliant; it just has to be revised, that\'s all. Also, you might want to get a beta reader - there are a few strange mispellings and other such stuff. But it\'s a good fic.

Oh you evil thing .. leaving us hanging with that kind of remark. I\'ve read and re-read this story a few times, I love what you\'ve done with the characters. Do you have any sort of notification of new chapters?

Thanks and keep up the great work.

Oh this chatper was classic, I love your Harry. He just gets better and better. He\'s all sensitive one moment and ruthless the next. His manipulation of Draco was perfect. Anyway, thank you for the update, at least when you do update you give us more than a few scant paragraphs.

god do I love this . I am obsessed with your Draco hes soooo cool.

This is one of my favourite stories on the web and i check pretty damn often for updates, so i\'m always pleased to read the next chapters. I think i noticed a few mistakes but i can only remember one off hand; when you use cliche instaed of clique. A cliche is an overused statement, and a clique is a group of people (often elitist). You use the wrong one when you say Theodore Nott never wanted to be a part of any cliche; and it should be clique. That\'s all. Not much really, but just thought you\'d like to know. Keep up the good work though!

Thank you!!! hugs for keepingat this. Ging.