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when you will update.i can\'t wait to see both of them bond^^!

yet another cliffhanger.... WHY MUST YOU TORTURE US!! but it was a really good chappie!

(I\'ll do your work for you.... WRITE YOU TALANTED CREATURE!!)

~*VIVA~LA~SMUT*~

forget the errors, just move on to the next chapter! this fic is awesome! it\'s the best pro slytherin i\'ve read yet! you\'ve done a superb job in making this work. please update as soon as u have the chance!!

Hey. First let me say that though I really do like your story and regularly check back for updates, I do have a few \"complaints\".

In the books it\'s easy to get the impression all Slytherins are evil and, while I like that yours is a pro-slytherin fic, I think you\'ve made the same mistake JKR has with the Gryffindors. They clearly have a tendency to be both stupid and reckless, not to mention judgemential, but in your story most of them come across as Evil. It would be bad enough if Ron and a *handful* of Gryffindors turned against Harry and the rest just chose not to take sides. It would still make him feel alone and betrayed, but still be more believable than having the whole House turn against him.
Same with Neville, (I really like your version of Neville btw, he\'s the best yet) I don\'t think everyone would suddenly hate him just for dating a snake, they might be colder and *some* might be rude/cruel but again, not the whole House.

Everyone doesn\'t have to be special. If you want to write a super!draco fic, fine, (better than a lot of the super!harry fics out there) and I think you\'ve done a good job of this, but isn\'t it enough with the Malfoy\'s being Veela and having special names? Why couldn\'t Harry still be himself, he\'s pretty powerful in his own right after all.

I really wish you hadn\'t mixed in Voldemort in Harry\'s family-tree as I think Harry being the heir to 2 of the founders is highly unlikely and kinda cliche. Also I doubt Harry would have squeezed that doll so fast, maybe in a chapter or two if you intend him to get darker, but not right away.

Lastly I would advise you to get a beta to read through your chapters before you post since it\'s hard to catch all the errors by yourself. I know some readers are impatient but I think most of us could wait an extra day or two for a chapter if it meant getting the edited version.

I hope you don\'t mind me pointing these things out as I\'m really trying to be helpful. /Emmie

I always thought DUmbledore had a favoritism with the gryffindor house>< The other teachers are hypocrits of acusing snape of playing favorites with the slytherins when he is the only one who protects the slytherin house. grrr

i love your Draco. he\'s so cool and vengeful and just...cool. and smart. and i\'m happy hes not like from other stories where something goes wrong and he begs his father to rectify it. oh no, this draco is smart and COOL. i love him.

Blaise/Neville w00t!! love it love it love THEM. stupid gryffindors and their prejudice.

I just wanted to know if I can be emailed updates of this wonderful, epic tale.

OK ...this is FAB ... thank you for sticking with it and returning (however infrequently) to update. It\'s such a delight to read a long story without starting to detest the characters. I was amazed that almost hardly any of the school year has gone by, you\'ve included so much into your tale. I especially liked the Potter/Malfoy fanclub whisperings and rumours - and Nott\'s eavesdropping! Funneh! Normally I would be glaring at the screen and crying \"where\'s the smut?\" but frankly this story hits the mark without it (though do please include some in the future!!) Congratulations on a well thought out plot, well-rounded characters and providing me with (1) a completely sleepless night and (2) several hours of enjoyment reading your story. I think it was Sarryn\'s recommendation that I followed to get here, and I cannot thank her enough for doing so - an excellent read!! I\'ve added it to my own recs list, you deserve the accolade!

If you don\'t continue this story all the way to the end, it will be the cruelest thing imaginable. Harry and Draco on the cusp of finding out everything and actually evolving into a lifetime bonding and the chapter ends? Having said that, I fully understand work problems intruding on your personal life. Believe me when I say that I am in the exact same situation in my own life. So, take some time, try and work it out, find a new job, switch jobs or careers or whatever, but PLEASE continue this story when you\'ve gotten to a better place!!! PLEASE!

OMG!!! NO!!! This is like... BAD! He killed Dumbledore!?!?! *shakes head* He\'s RELATED DIRCETLY to Tom!??!?! EWWW! and HEY! 37 chapters later and STILL not Deraco/Harry snugglies?!?! *whimpers* PLEASEEEEE get mroe of this out! this was so awsome!!! I love this story I have been GLUED to it for like... two days now! I can\'t take it!! Its so cool!! I really really can\'t wait for more. I just LOVE Slytherin and Draco... and even Lucius and Snape! WOW!

VERY cute. Despite it being a little messy and having odd grammar mistakes, this is a very entertainting fic. I can\'t wait to see how this all unfolds!