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This story is fantastic, I hope to see more of it soon.

Oh. My. Wow. How could you have a revelation like THAT and then not update in so long??? This is crazy! But oh so intriguing... I really like this story and all the complexities you\'ve woven into it. It always amazes me when people can come up with things so complex and still keep it all straight. You have a few surface errors, but nothing too bad, and the amazingness of the story keeps my mind off the boo boos. But please, update soon! This is an awesome story and I can\'t wait to see the next installment!
evan malfoy

I just had a horrible thought! This site is always threatening to shut down, do you post somewhere else as well or only here? N\'ways I love this story, it is without out a doubt in my mind like the best of all hpfanfiction I have thus far read! Its so good I would read fanfiction based on this fanfiction! Can\'t wait for the next update, *falls to knees* PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!! *holds bag of money*
Random person: That\'s bribery!
C: *looks over* its better then blackmail! or threatening! So keep your opinions to yourself. *looks back* PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!

come on and update! I\'m dieing to know what happens next!!!

Am I the 300 review??

If so, congratulations and also fabulous fanfic, well you know I love it.

Please update soon, we all want to know what happends.

And I wish you the best of luck my friend.

bye

Love, love, LOVE this story. I hope you find the time to update soon, Im really excited to see how this turns out. Its pretty different from what I\'ve read before and one of the first things I\'ve read on adultfanfic. Keep up the awesome job!

OMFG! OMFG! OMFG!

UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!

I am now officially addicted.

OMFG WHAT\'S GOING TO HAPPEN!?

Please please please continue! I\'ve gotta have chapter 34! Is Dumbledore dead? Voldemort is Harry\'s grandfather? Holy moly! No wonder he didn\'t want to kill Lily. What else is Draco hiding?

I just love this story - especially the Harry/Draco part, but also in general. First I feared it would be too much pro-Slytherin in a simle way (you know, without any explanations given), but it really makes the reader see why Slytherin is as it is and why Gryffindors can be as prejudiced as everybody. This story has me addicted, after this chapter I even got up and made a family tree for the Slytherin (Riddle/Evans), Gryffindor (Potter) and Malfoy/Veela branches. But... is Belatrix also a Veela? And is she really Narcissa\'s sister? I think you said as much. So what about them being Sirius Black\'s cousins? I would really not mind at all if the relationships were different than in the books, and I honestly cannot remember all the little details you\'ve already given, I\'ve read the main part of the story a while ago, so could you give any clarifications? I hope you will not try to incorporate anything from HBP, I doubt it would fit.

My original review was actually thoughts i had throughout the story as i read, i wrote everything down and planned on posting it all. The i looked back and saw how long it is...*smiles sheepishly* But i like it so i\'m going to keep it...send it to my friends and try to lure them to the wonderfullness that is \"spell master\" *drool* A sinops of what i had \"\"\"\"\" I love them! EWWW! HES GOING TO SCREW HE CORPES OF HARRY!!! OH NO! HES GOING TO BE CAUGHT! DAMN! NO! NO! Right now he remindes me of Raenef from Demon Diary.... I love him~! Oooo that means Snape can be eclipes. Penny Pincher Malfoy. Awww the poor snake-zine! Poor baby dragon-snake! LOL Not only is he narcoleptic idiot, but hes a narcoleptic idiot with a bad vocabulary. Poor Draco potter got speed on his side.\" LOL I\'m sure they\'ll like it as much as i did. You have to update! You must! I mean you left it as such a spot! ANd harry is just getting to know about his moms family.Damn Tom Riddle!........... \"So this was how temptation seduced the righteous. Harry thought absently. Not with threats of vengeance and death, but with beauty and the promise of *justice*. \" Now thats one i want to send to someone, or rmember it or something. LOL I love Draco hes like the devil incarnate. i heard it somewhere the statmen \"sweet words and a tempting offer, oh lord of lies!\" still remember it. He pulls out the lemon drop! Now the distant cousines....*looks at you in awe* you really are pulling out the good scenes. Ah the internet is a wonderous place...why just look at this kickass story i found...wonderful reading without the price...thank you! \"\"\"\"\"I cant believe it i really cant see that one coming. Now i must say this because my perverted side insists on having its say. I really cant wait till it becomse nc17...its like the present you know you will get but you have to wait till you do...and it kills you till you get it! However i love that it is taking time for harry and draco to get to that stage in their relationship..it makes it more understandable, more believeable. Because lets face it harry potter and draco malfoy would not simply confess love out of the blue. They HATED eachother. Things like that dont happen. With this story you actually are making them start to get over it and then actually like eachother etc. Another thing is that the whole Gryffindor buttkissing that goes on alot. I mean not everyone in gryffindor is wonderful, just like not everyone is slytherin is bad. Just because your brave doesnt make you good, and whats so wrong with ambition? So i hope you can update! Soon (hopefully)! I really want to know whats going to happen next. Does Dumbledore feel the pain? At least Draco told harry he woudl lie to him so if he gets caught out for half truths its like \"I told you so\"