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When are you going to update?

Wish this story would continued with.

this is ok, but your grammar is shocking, as is your layout at times. It looks very amateurish. You need to learn now to write speech properly, and get a beta as you use a lot of words incorrectly.

Hello!!!

Something screw up the formatting for the story is all weird, no spaces between lines.

I'm just giving this call to the universe and hope you will answer.

Hi~ I just had to review to try my luck in helping u capture ur muse again! ^__^ I absolutely love this story. Draco is fascinating. I always prefer it when he's a b*stard, but nice to Harry when he starts to like him, especially when he doesn't want to. (He's like candy, hard and tempting on the outside, but with an unexpected soft gooey center, and you Know he's just Bad for you, haha) It's the first fic i've read where Harry actually got resorted into Slytherin. I love that being Slytherin makes him feel justified for finally acting 'bad' sometimes, like when he decided to steal Excalibur ^_^

Hermione is perfect too, with her sneakily trying to help Harry. Ron... haih... I thought at first that it was unlikely that the whole of Gryffindor would boycott Harry for 2 years, but then again, in the 4th book, Ron was nasty to Harry for so long just because he thought Harry had cheated, and hadn't shared the secret with him. He was pissed not because Harry cheated, but that he wasn't in on it. Which just shows what double standards they can have sometimes. If it were an underage Slytherin that got in the Triwizard Tournament, Ron would;ve been shouting 'CHEAT' from the roofs. So yeah... I love it that you're exploring all these aspects, and what if's. I never liked that they categorised the children and pigeon-holed them as 'noble' or 'sneaky', when all they had done to date was jam an old hat on their head. ^_____^

I love the humour in this fic too! It pops up suddenly and makes me stifle my laughter cos i'm reading in the dead of night when i'm supposed to be asleep and I don't want to get caught (hint, hint: me loves ur story) I feel sorry for Remus though, even as I glory that in this fic Snape is wanted by not one but TWO veela, hee hee.... Sirius raping Harry saddens me but is still believable. When Harry mentioned losing his Firebolt, I was on the edge of my seat, because I just knew that he had destroyed it, and I wanted Draco to have a reaction to that... ^_^; too bad our dragon was too busy scheming and carrying out his revenge against Gryffindor. I just can't wait till Harry meets Ron on the field during the Quidditch games.

I also am so curious about why the Slytherin's are being questioned, and what's going to happen now that Harry knows his grandad is Tom. I want to know how that crazy Dark Lord actually managed to procreate with someone to create Lily. And a squib no less. It must have been why he didn't want to kill Lily at first.

So many things I want to know more about. This review is already too long *sweatdrop*. But I really really hope you continue to write. You absolutely have to, since this is the only 'Harry is resorted into Slytherin' fic i've read, and because your Draco is just going through his transformation!!! Pls don't leave him like that, with brown goo coming out of him... Imagine how pissed he would be to be in that condition so long, haha...

Ok, I think I'm done. I wish you all the best in everything, and I hope you find interest in this lovely, lovely story again!

Hmmm, I just read your review list page, and it's kinda freaking me out that the last time u updated was 2 years ago. Oh well... I guess i'm lucky i've only just read it and am not currently languishing in my 2nd year, waiting for the next installment, haha! All the same, I wonder if there's a way to get alerted when you update. I just joined AFF so I can review here and there doesn't seem to be a Story Alert thingy like in FF.Net. Hope that if you do update, you'll e-mail me then. Or something. You could start a yahoo group or mailing list *grins sweetly* (Cos I know you'd be soooo pestered to update if you do that, haha).

And this second review is not totally just to increase ur review tally and motivate you (Ehe...). I forgot some things about Neville and Blaise i wanted to say. I'd like to see why Blaise loves Neville so much. I totally understand Neville's love for Blaise. But what does Blaise get out of their relationship? I'd like to quote Draco, and say that everything's like business... I need to know what he stands to gain/lose from starting a relationship with Neville. What's so nice about Neville, so special? I don't dislike their relationship, I find it endearing. But all the same... was it Neville's staunchly defending his friendship with Blaise that sparked Blaise's admiration? (how did they start and keep their friendship with all the rivalry too) Was it Neville's good-heartedness and generosity?

^___^ I know they're not the main couple. I just want a few lines from Blaise, so I feel that Neville's not just a cherub who got lucky, but someone special who was recognised by such by the unlikeliest person.

Also... Hehe... Did Dumbledore feel his life being squeeeeeeeezed out of him, before the lemon drop fell out? Haha...

P.S: I'll have you know, I think i'm getting a cold from staying up all night to read this story. *pouts*. Consider these long reviews, your punishment *grins*


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*pathetically* I don't suppose you secretly have a website set up, with all the other chapters, continuing from where you left off on AFF? *reaches for tissues*

Tee hee... I'm so absentminded. Anyway, I don't know if my e-mail is hidden or not, because i'm lazy to check. It's jaeyechan@yahoo.com. And... I'm such a stalker, but I googled you and lo and behold, i found your fp.com profile, and i just wanted to say, 'I'm rooting for you!!!' Hope you can find a com, even at a library or something to start penning more Spell Master!

Please update soon!!! It's been a year to the day since you've posted anything and I'm going insane not knowing how it's going to end. I'm on my knee's here! Please, please, please update!

Pathetic, I know.... :sighs: I have no life, lol.

;)
Alicia

please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! finish this! i love this story and i keep coming back to see if it's updated. i'll give you cookies and chocolate if you do.

*cries plaintively* Moooorreeee. Please, moooorrrreeee. I miss this story.
And you stopped at a pretty bad cliffhanger too.