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by LadyProngs

person jami_lee
schedule April 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
cool story. wish there was more.
person miss_vicious
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please continue this story,don\'t mind the haters ..it\'s wonderfully written
person SweetFlava
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is really good! keep going!
person hate
schedule October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
fannon crap
person LotM
schedule October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was absolutely fantastic! Hey, don't sweat the flame. I thought Lily was written beautifully!! Update soon!!
person Decade
schedule September 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lily is way out of character. Bullshit.
person pamma
schedule September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was really hot!! Great job!
person pamma
schedule September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! How could James forgive Siriuse? Come on! Make him hate them all!! i'm so evill... PLEASE?! And update soon!