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for Look for the Girl With the Broken Smile

by tonksx

person Anon
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BRILL UP TO NOW HOPE TO C MORE
person James
schedule October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. it is well written so far, and sounds like a pretty good original idea. from your summary it sounds like, at least to me, that hermione is going to get in over her head with krum, he will probably shag her in the arse, and she will be to ashamed to tell her friends, but they will eventuallyure ure it out and come to her rescue.

If that is not an accurate assessment of the summary, well it doesnt matter, I would love to read the rest of the story from you pov. It sounds like you have a great idea.... I will check back again to see if you have updated.

I see that you havent recieved any reviews yet, just thought I would remind if you, if dont already know, most people just cruise thru and download the story to their computer and then read it later....