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August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"Oh, Remey... I'm going to make me a man, with blonde hair and a tan... who's good for relieve my t-t-t-tension!"
"Shall I come up to the lab," called Severus, "and see what's on your slab?"
ROTFLMAO
I sooo loved the Rocky Horror bits. Some people are just asses for flaming you. I loved it, but I'm a bit sick and sadistic too. Oh well. Please write more. =)
"Shall I come up to the lab," called Severus, "and see what's on your slab?"
ROTFLMAO
I sooo loved the Rocky Horror bits. Some people are just asses for flaming you. I loved it, but I'm a bit sick and sadistic too. Oh well. Please write more. =)
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August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
'Severus unleashed his mighty cock so that it jiggled with some serendipitous rhythm unsurprising for the 40 year old sprite-monger, who had unreservedly leeched and genuflected upon the delicious hits of the eighties and nineties, bouncing merrily along to "Can't Touch This" by M.C. Hammer. Sans wacko pants.'
ha ha ha that KILLED me.
ha ha ha that KILLED me.
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January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
bwah ha ha
""He used to saddle me up like one of Santa' Reindeer!" Remus screeched, his eyes as pale a yellow as male baby chicks' pulped up bodies after disposal in the wood chipper, and his hands scrunched up into fists just below his chin as though suddenly transported back to those horrid seasonal doggy-dress-up kits, complete with fake ears, antlers and silver bells around the neck."
ROTFLMAO
Honestly what is with these other reviewers chastising your literacy skills. What are they ? English teachers or something.
""He used to saddle me up like one of Santa' Reindeer!" Remus screeched, his eyes as pale a yellow as male baby chicks' pulped up bodies after disposal in the wood chipper, and his hands scrunched up into fists just below his chin as though suddenly transported back to those horrid seasonal doggy-dress-up kits, complete with fake ears, antlers and silver bells around the neck."
ROTFLMAO
Honestly what is with these other reviewers chastising your literacy skills. What are they ? English teachers or something.
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November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ROFLMAO!!! Fave line: "He wanted to drown in the puddle of his own connundrum..." OH GODS, but this is good!!!
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You definatley deserve a golf clap for your rebuttal to the less enlightened reviews. Good for you.
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
crap
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL this story is certainly an equine of a different hue. Thanks for the change of pace.
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok, i really don't see a plot.
or anything really in this.
the sentence structure is also lacking.
work on this some and improve and try to lay out your thoughts and go through it in a more reader-friendly manner.
or anything really in this.
the sentence structure is also lacking.
work on this some and improve and try to lay out your thoughts and go through it in a more reader-friendly manner.
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, but this makes no sense whatsoever. Please learn how to write properly before posting in public. Read some books or something to get a feel for what you need to do, I beg you. This is way too short and has no discernable plot, the grammar is horrible and I'm not sure what is going on or what the purpose of this "story" is. Not to mention, the title is pretty silly. I only clicked on this out of my own morbid curiosity, I wasn't expecting much and was not surprised when I started reading. Just because you can tap on a keyboard and sling around a few big words every once in awhile does NOT make you a writer. Don't take this as a flame, but- this is a mess. I hope you will make an effort to keep learning and improving.