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King Squishy, Lord Sniffles;

*applauds* marvellous job, way OCC but I loved it none the less and I couldnt' stop laughing. Especially at the thought of Snape singing and dancing its just, like, WOW! lol.

Looking forward to more; mind emailling me when you update? gypsy_willow90@hotmail.com. Thanks

tis funni :) please write more

Hilarious. Absolutely hilarious. A good story so far, though you could have described the slytherins undouptly shocked expressions atleast a little. But, a very good story so far non-the-less. Please update soon.

Hmm, well, everyone in this story seems to be so out of character. Why did Harry forgive Snape so soon after he drugged him into having sex with him? Why wasn\'t Harry at least scared when he found out he was pregnant? I mean, his first reaction was a smile! Why did Snape and Harry (particularly Harry) forgive Ron so easily for that low stunt he pulled with the reporters? Harry should have been screaming his head off at Ron, accusing him of being a jealous bitch and to never talk to him again! (Then later on of course they could reconcile and everything) Why wasn\'t Hermione more...Hermione-ish? Why didn\'t she scold Ron properly for doing that to Harry? Hermione should have made him feel lower than dirt! If Ron is obssesed with Harry, how is a 2 minute conversation with SNAPE of all people going to make him suddenly say \"Hey! I\'m going to get over Harry in 1..2..3! I\'M CURED!\"? How is everyone on the staff so accepting of the realtionship? No suspiscion? No outrage? No anything?

Well, these are my criticisms. The overall storyline of the book is very good, I just think some of the characters are a little unbelieveable.

I would love to see how the story ends and would also like to see if you are going to make it into a series.

Please and Thank you,

Terri

I just read all 5 chapter\'s i would like to know when you will up date this story

Moving a little bit quickly for me, but I still like it. Wow, Hermione was straight to the point, wasn\'t she? A little rude but it\'s a good story so far, so I can\'t wait for more, like how the issue with Ron will be decided!

Post more, update this soon! I really wanna read more!

Very good fic, I thought that Snape would react diffrently when he found out that harry was pregnant but that wasn\'t the case. I loved your story anyway..