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for Miss Malfoy

by WildeOscar

person Bargle5
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FWIW, I e-mailed the author and she isn\'t planing to finish the story.
person Slytherin_Lover_505
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please continue. i love your story.
person CaptainJaneway
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely adorable. I can\'t wait to read some more and what pairing you choose.
person HollyMahogany
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I couldn\'t stop laughing while reading the part where Draco is trying to get dressed. You would think it wouldn\'t be THAT hard to put a bra on. And then him saying he doesn\'t know how girls get dressed without playing with our breasts, too funny. I could make an argument saying that they get dressed all the time without playing with themselves, but that would be telling a lie!! :) Great job, cant wait for more.
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh I very much like this, revenge of the Ravenclaw girls..hihi. Although there isn\'t much to review yet, I do like your characterisations, Malfoy would be so cranky bout this, but the fact harry and hermione didn\'t protest more because they had to take care of him is a bit ooc. Hey it\'s still Malfoy, Malfoy who would like to see Harry 6 feet under, and because Snape is falsly accusing harry.... again.

But well, i do like it, although i do hope it\'s not going to be a hermione/draco fic....sigh...

Well you said in your A/N you wanted to keep it canon...

okay I\'ll stop my random thoughts here....not much use I guess.

But continue, please, I\'m curious.

LL
person Pallas
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good update!! I had to luagh about the whole bra and thights thing; I could picture it quite clearly! Is he staying with the girls? That might create some funny situations! Not many questions this time; just one! Update!!!
person sak
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, Draco has tormented enough people--that\'s how he got in his situation. It just would not do to have no one torment him in return. Hopefully, there are lessons learned and maybe some people in Gryffindor get closer to SlytSlytherin prat. I anticipate more fun from you!
person PrideAndPrejudice
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You\'re right the male to female thing has been done often....but your style makes it very interesting so far. You really are doing a good job at keepingryonryonemseemselves. I loved the guys reaction when Draco walked in. \"he\'s pretty! Why\'s he pretty Harry?\" Gotta love it. I really can\'t wait to read more of this so hurry hurry. as for wait to cause draco more humilation as a female, have you ever been to summer camp? If you have you can pull out some of the tricks you pulled on the girls that were the \'outcasts\' at camp. Simple stuff as honey in the shampoo bottle, taking all the clothes while she\'s sleeping and hidding them throughout the tower. really juvinal(spw) stuff, but it can be turned in to some funny situations. Kudos!
PAP
person ~DM~
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very intriguing beginning! It will be interesting to see where this goes. Be careful to avoid the traps common to gender-switching and make sure to keep your story infused with humour.

Keep writing!

~D~
person Pallas
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fifty points for you for being so original!! Really, I like this plot already muc much! I wonder, though... Is this going to be a Hermione/Draco pairing later in the story? (I have to admit being a bit... addicted to that pairing.) But whatever you have in mind, I would very much like to read it!!