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October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story! I hope you do post a sequel, that isif you haven't already!
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August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love your stories, have read all the way through this, Marriage Vows, and waiting eagerly for the next part of Love & Parenthood.
Nice to see someone who is, finally, using UK grammar, spellings and slang terms - I just can't imagine anyone that is part of the world of Harry Potter saying things like "You're getting pissed" unless they were referring to alcohol!
Much as I would love to see you posting every day, I understand you are now working from your live journal, so please do update when you can, and I will wait patiently for the next installment - even if I can't wait to see what happens next :)
Keep up the good work.
Nice to see someone who is, finally, using UK grammar, spellings and slang terms - I just can't imagine anyone that is part of the world of Harry Potter saying things like "You're getting pissed" unless they were referring to alcohol!
Much as I would love to see you posting every day, I understand you are now working from your live journal, so please do update when you can, and I will wait patiently for the next installment - even if I can't wait to see what happens next :)
Keep up the good work.
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August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The word grotty is a perfectly valid english word. It is not an exact synonym for groggy as it means unwell rather than tired but there are places where either would suffice. My spellings follow the English traditions and are acceptable to my spell checker. I am prone to typing errors especially with punctuation but that is down to a rather dodgy keyboard and the fact that I studied English at Oxford and not typing.
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August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Uh, grotty? Was this a type-o? The word is GROGGY as in \"I am feeling GROGGY and wish to go to bed.\" Sorry to sound bitchy. But I just couldn\'t get past that one without thinking, \"Shit, am I the only one that reads fanfiction that has taken an English course who has still retained what they learned?\" Sometimes, it feels just that way. Like now.
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August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good work! Keep up the good work. P.S. Spell check!
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August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i cried a little. that was a great....no fantastic fic. definantly write more!
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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bloody Brilliant! I love this story to no end. I really hope there is a sequel but if not I\'ll just have to read this one over and over and over.... Great job :)
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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
An excellent story! I\'d love to see a sequel.
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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW this was a great story. I hope you write more. I can\'t wait for your new story. Keep up the good writting.
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July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Evil, evil, evil person! Leaving off like that. --;; Please continue. I\'ll give you a cookie...
Great plot >_>
Great plot >_>