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for Blood of the Virgin Witch

by selened

person Anon
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked it a lot. I especially liked the loss of innocence for the ritually being consented pleasure, not just breaking the hymen. It would nice to read another epilogue with what happens after. I understand why you refrain from doing so, it is really hard not to make it corny. Severus and Hermione still/could speak to Luscious, Severus and Hermione needed to visit her parents, their actual wedding, where they end up career wise, having a child, trials of the Death Eaters: Severus and Luscious must prove their innocence, and everyone returning from the final battle. I thoroughly enjoyed the story.

Witch Myth
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! If that is PWP, then what will it be like when you sit down to write a full blown epic? Your own recreation of "War And Peace"? Please, do absolutely try!

I really, really like this. Why doesn
person Anon
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person Aleksandra
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the fic! I was suprised to see that it was 16 chapters and not 3, but hey, pleasant suprise. I enjoyed the plot and your writing style ^^

Thanks for writing ^^

~Alik
person illnevertell
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHEW! I just read the entire story in one sitting and for a few minutes there I thought I had lost my mind. It took me longer than usual to catch on to the fact that there is a chapter out of place. What a relief! I thought I had finally fried my brain from reading too much smut. ( Really great smut at that!) This was a fantastic fic. I loved the story line. Very original and tying it all to Merlin was really clever. I am now moving on to more of your fics. I have truly enjoyed your work and I look forward to reading more of it.* Kudos* on a great fic!
Jaimie
person selened
schedule November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The story is finished. At the moment no sequel is planned. I have a WIP which is almost finished and I have two more addtions to the Marriage Vows series.
person Tracy
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, but you haven\'t updated in a long time. Are you going to ever finish it? I hope that you do.