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for It seemed so right

by CaseyL

person Anon
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person jasmine
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I know you have not updated in a while. Love the begining of the story. If at all possible, please continue.

Thanks

Jasmine
person Robin
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice end of war.
You put an asterix (*) next to that Latin? spell presumably for footnote-translation which you left out. It's a bit confusing since you can't find a footnote, which actually wouldn't be too bad.
Waiting for more chapters but don't have much hope because of the time (it IS 2006 and you published the story 2004)
Prove me wrong!
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person spaz141
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Looks interesting, thanks.
person star no star
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The fluency of this story is excellent. Write more please.