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June 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ummmm why does it skip from chapter 3 to 6?
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June 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi - that was a truely beautiful story and you obviously are a very talented writer, to take tired old themes and breathe new lifto tto them....
Just one thing though AFF.net is annoying as it has a word limit for each chapter entry, and you seem to have exceeded it in the first and second chapter. the ends of part 3, all 4 and 5 as well as the end of 8 and all of 9. In a way it\'s good, because even if you don\'t continue it, there\'s of of this wonderful story for me to read!!!
~Photis~
Just one thing though AFF.net is annoying as it has a word limit for each chapter entry, and you seem to have exceeded it in the first and second chapter. the ends of part 3, all 4 and 5 as well as the end of 8 and all of 9. In a way it\'s good, because even if you don\'t continue it, there\'s of of this wonderful story for me to read!!!
~Photis~
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May 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'d really like to see you add more to this story.
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March 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was a beautiful story, you know. I wish I could write that good. I like how you described things and the way you made Harry think. It was just a really good fic. I hope you write more in the future, something along the lines of this. I\'d enjoy reading more of your fanfiction.
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March 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I...This...Well.AHHHHH! I can\'t find words to say...But I guess I should try. You made me cry,you made me laugh and you made as desperate as Harry. You should write a book like this. The story was inspirating and it sucked you in,like you were there. This a great piece of art. I\'ll won\'t forget. I am not saying never or ever because they are too strong words but I loved this....even love is lame hen I try to describe your story.
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March 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! Wonderful! Masterfully written....I must scurry back to the beginning and reread, I\'m entranced....and do write the next book SOON!!!
*bows humbly*
*bows humbly*
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March 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Although it was a little dark, I thought your story was magnificent. I\'ve never really been a fan of Harry/Severus, but I do like your story, more then I tho I w I would upon originally coming into it. I think your style of writing suits this coupling very well, and it might be an idea for you to persue writing this coupling. I know if I came upon future works of yours with this coupling I would most assuredly read it. Bravo, you did an incredible job on this fic!
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March 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
really really good story and i love the descriptive language you use. its really excellent. but the story cuts off at the end. i dont know if there was supposed to be more or if there is another chapter or anything, but hey if there is email me! i would love to read more.
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March 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Where did the rest go? Just kidding ;). Lovely story, I hope you continue soon. Great job with Harry\'s feelings..
Love, Inge
Love, Inge
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February 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
where? the rest??????? AHH!