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(Is too lazy to log in) It's late, I'm bored, so I decided to read your fic. I like it. It has a good start. Hell, it woke me up! Now I must read more...

This fic is very dark... I like it....

That was interesting. I liked this chapter a lot. not that any of the others were not to my liking.

This was quite angsty. Me like ^_^

now I get why those reviews said, "That's it?" over and over again. That's it? I repeat. Well, I guess I could guess what would happen from there. Snape and Harry would make out. Probably bed each other at some later time if now then. They will probably live together for either the rest of their lives, or just break it off a few years or less from then. Hopefully the first.

There are fan fictions in this world which I enjoy, because they are funny, or amusing, or heart-wrenching. This story is in a league of it\'s own. It\'s beautiful, it\'s wonderful, it\'s dark in a way that one can relate to, in a way that makes sense, in a way that isn\'t forced. I love the way you write Snape, he\'s my favourite character and you portray him perfectly. If I could give you one bit of advice, it would be to write forever. This story is *stunning*. Some people want to write a depressed Harry, an unhappy Harry, but mostly they\'re people who have no idea about anything. You have taken a hold of Harry\'s character and molded it so perfectly...I love the way he acts, the defiance. And it\'s understandable. You make everything so believable, you take a hold of emotions and feelings and give them to these characters who you portray wonderfully and wrap everything up into a gruesome loveliness...like Harry\'s pictures, perfect in their flaws. Not that this story has any flaws, but you know what I mean, I hope.

I especially loved the way you described the picture of the young man. \"Slit my throat, watch me bleed, I swear I\'ll do it prettily.\"...there are no words.

I just want you to know that this is probably my most favourite bit of writing...ever.
Out of everything.
In the world.
Know that. :D

I loved this artistic Harery ery much! And his attitude towards Dumbledore and the others was really facinating. I loved this fic, but to tell the truth I was surprised that after a whole 10 chapters the only real interaction between Harry and Severus was a hand on a shoulder and just a \"stay\". At least a kiss (ven a small one) *sigh* i know it\'s your stlye but i felt the urge to write my opinion. As i said great fic! ;)

Beautiful ... artfully written, very angsty and ... bright. You know I don\'t think I\'ve ever read a fic of this kind with a happy ending?

i loved it but the ending was to blah for me. it was so simple but the rest of it was so dark. i just wish it would of had more to it at the end.

*sighs happily* I adore this. It\'s just beautiful. The ending fits so perfectly.