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for Ice-cream

by AntagonistLen

person Anon
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what

the

FUCK?!
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was hillarious....great us of, er imagery. I laughed the whole thing through...Good job!
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was so weird, and Funny and totally cliche fucking.

Snape and his shampoo...and ewww Hermione done by Dobby.

This really made me laugh, somehow it\'s such a beautiful character rendition of Lucius Malfoy:
After Hermione had been scrubbing for about an hour the luscious Lucius Malfoy suddenly flooed into the classroom. He was quite the expert at flooing, he didn\'t even need a fireplace to exit from and he could do so even from his cell at Azkaban. No wonder people were always escaping from there.

Yey great parody

LL
person elenora
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ahem.. the start was pretty ahem good.. You know what I mean.. :)

But the ending hiii.. Very good use of the commercial ;) Too bad they changed it into a flower :D
Very nice ending, very nice... and just very nice.. :D but of course not really nice considering the fact what was happening before and what was Herm wea wearing aka nothing...

Some more nonsense blab? :D
person tig
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sheesh...it\'s a PARODY, kids! :)

Honestly, I skipped over that part, m\'self, but caught on pretty quickly. It\'s kind of sad how long it took, though. A lot of this stuff actually shows up ics..cs...just not normally so much at once 8\\ I think the first real tickle of \"paaaaaarody\" came when Dobby had multiple \"organisms.\" Up until then, it was more of a \"woooah, some one actually wrote this? car wreck!!\"

As a parody, though, it kicks ass. Which brings up the question...Is it better to say \"God!\" or \"Shit!\" during sex? is ois one supposed to stick to the normal chorus of \"OOOOOOOOOOOO,\" and does it rhyme with \"through\" or \"though?\"

Keep it up- Tig
person Snapeaholic
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooookay...That was really weird. Hmmmm....well....nice job?