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Ok looks good


Trio

cute. thanks.

short chapters, simple plot, fluffy so far... i adore it. :) and how dare you leave it at that for the chapter...

I love Harry/Hermione stories, they are my favourite. Your chapters are a little on the short side, maybe consider building up your detail to give them a little more meat. Hope you continue, thanks.

you\'re off to a good start i think. i like how at ease harry and hermione are. they know each other so well, almost like they\'ve been married forever. i do believe this will be a sweet story, but i guess i should hold my judgement until there\'s more. i do have some criticism though. the story seems to switch between past and present tense a lot. there needs to be only one. please choose one. other than that, i look forward to reading more.

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