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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! i luv this story, its so great, i cant wait for the next chapter to be up. plz plz plz update very soon. i will review for all you new chapters, so plz update
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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good job. Its coming along very nicely. :)
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April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. I have never been so interested in a fictional story as I am now. I have read all the chapters that you have posted thud far and I can\'t wait until the next one gets put up. I want her to kill Draco but that\'s not my call. This is really gettinod. od. The only thing is yeah some of the words are spelled wrong so it makes it a little harder to understand at times. Other than that all I have to say is keep up the good work. I can hardly wait to read more.
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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Hermione kicked Malfoy\'s ass! He deserved it even if Snape didn\'t really. I\'m just saying bec because I love Snape. This is still good and i await the next chapter(s).
ArienAstera
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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4... I guess Hermione proved herself quite easily!!! I can just imagine the look on Draco\'s face when he got knocked on his butt!!!
Sounds like Severus had better watch his backside!!! I wonder if Albus will take the threat seriously & send Severus back to Voldy or if he will keep him away & safe?!? Til chapter 5, Deb >^..^<
Sounds like Severus had better watch his backside!!! I wonder if Albus will take the threat seriously & send Severus back to Voldy or if he will keep him away & safe?!? Til chapter 5, Deb >^..^<
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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like the first chapter ar. ar. Not use to reading stories about magic and what not but you have managed to keep me interessted. Keep up the good work and I can\'t wait to read more of your great works. You go girl. I am making Lowman read it as well.
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March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far. I love how you have Hermione strong and independant. She\'s not a weaklin at all. I can\'t wait to read more. I also love how you have shown a bit of a soft side to Voldemort. This shoud be a very very interesting story. Please update soon.
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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not knowing that much of the Harry Potter universe, I do know that the characterizations really come through with its casual tone... Dialogue is natural, not pompous or lethargic in it\'s mood. Obviously a work in progress, but once its polished up it\'s going to read even smoother than it already does. Really gets to the action immediately. Keep at BT BTW: Crimson red slicks up a description even better than blood red. Try it.
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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m still wishing blood red gets occasionally swapped with crimson. A trifle of a concern, to be sure, but I think that chapter two would benefit from a cutaway to whats going on back at Hogwarts... or perhaps another scene away from Herminone (sic) but still at Voldemorts. Don\'t want to overstate her role in this story... use it as a time passing trick for pacing.
Keep it up. ;)
Keep it up. ;)
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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter three... well, its up for posting\'s sake. Will review it more when its fleshed out.
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