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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i like your story,it\'s very interesting.please update soon.
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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooo yeah. This is definitely a story worth pursuing, in case you\'re having any doubts, I *love* the vamp thing... If he\'s going to teach them to survive, perhaps \'Mione could have an edge ? Something along the lines of previous fighting/physical trng tng to balance out the intensity with which she hones her mind ?
Just a suggestion, whatever you do, I\'ll be waiting to read the next part :)
Cheers!
Just a suggestion, whatever you do, I\'ll be waiting to read the next part :)
Cheers!
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March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! That was awesome! I can\'t wait to find out what\'s happening to the Professor! I also want to know what happened with that book Harry was looking at! Wicked story!
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March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, go Hermione. MMMmmm vampires are so sexy. This story is great. More please.
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March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a very engaging story you\'ve got going here. I honestly can\'t find anything that merits constructive criticism, because you\'re doing it quite well. The dialogue reads how people normally talk, the narrative flows smoothly, the grammar--THANK GOD YOU\'VE GOOD GOD GRAMMAR!!!! :-) All in all, I\'m hooked, and ready to see where you\'ll take us in this journey. :-)
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Let me guess, he\'s a vampire. Sounds mighty tasty though.
cheers.
cheers.
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Don\'t worry, you have done beautifully. You have the right idea, keep it up!
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooo, he\'s a vampire. Hermione...Hermione...Hermione...what is it with you and bad boys.
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Can\'t wait to find out who Gabriel is. Go Hermione! More please.
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting.... never read a fic with quite this plot. Can\'t wait for more!!