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by StealthySoprano

person Anon
schedule June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice to see your writing has improved , it\'s an interesting story but I think people are put off by your elaborate use of the english languagd lad lack of general smut, but still a good story, I do hope you continue.
person hcbroncochick
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m only on the second chapter of your story so far, and I\'m not quite sure what to think of it.. but it\'s rather interesting... :) I like how Lucius and Severus keep giggling with one another. lol
person Lidra
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is really good! Well-written, good style. Email is above.