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for Dead Inside

by Hel

person Deb >^..^< .
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading chapter 1 & I do so hope that you will be adding more to this AMAZING piece soon!!! The subject matter is so sad, but I do like the way you are writing your version of this challenge!!!

I like the fact that Hermione is working with Harry & Draco in this!!! Harry\'s attitude sort of surprised me, but I\'m assuming that there is a very good reason that he wants Severus saved!!! I can\'t wait to find out what it is as well as how they will save him & if they will be able to find Albus!!! Til chapter 2, Deb >^..^<
person aprilgrey
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Did you write \"A Day in the Life of Severus Snape?\" If you did, I am fangirling! It was the inspiration for me to start writing Snapefics. I just loved your interpretation of him. Anyway, I\'m enjoying the story at hand very much and am eagerly anticipating an update. Many thanks!
April
person JestersTear
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have just read your first chapter, and let me tell you that it filled my expectations completely. Thank you for taking a shot at this challenge, I hope to read mor of it soon.
person ancientgirl
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great start. I love how even though he seemed to have made their lives miserable (except for Draco), they risked a lot to get him back.
person scatteredlogic
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is an excellent beginning and I can\'t wait to see what you have planned for the rest of the story. You\'ve already eluded to several intriguing possibilities. This particular challenge is very disturbing, simply because having someone as intelligent as Snape reduced to an automaton is so horrifying. Well done!
person Redone
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice beginning, but you have very many run-on sentences.
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow that was a very good chapter and a start to a great fic I love the details you put into it...............Keep up the great work
person Susan
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really good start. Hope you update soon! Is there going to be more background on why Harry, Hermione and Draco are together in this? Thanks for what promises to be a good read!

susan
person Jenny7611
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great start to the story. I like Hermione\'s anger and I\'m glad Harry and Draco are there. I\'m really looking forward to more!