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for The Luckiest Man on Earth

by AureliaFlint

person lumen1
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh no, no, no, nooooooooooooo!!!! this can't be happening... first of all, the matter of persephone being the one involved in the story is wrong, the girl, like aurelius says, she's to prim and classy to stoop this low and have all these absurdities written on that paper!!! i'm very glad and suprised that my dear natalya did not make a fuzz about the little liaison that aurelius had with the girl... the matter of aurelius having a fling with the girl... well, i condone it since his had had his fling with his mistress:)

oh please, don't let katie loose the baby.... pleaseeeeeeeeeeee begging on knees and crying my heart out!!!!!! billy can't get away with this hideous crime!!!! that woman is really off her rockers, billy is really mad a total psycho... she doesn't belong in azkaban, she belong in saint mungos!!!!

yes aurelia, you did leave us with a very cruel cliffhanger which i hope will have a good outcome... i could not bare it if something really bad happen to katie and her baby::sniff, sniff::

lumen1
person FlintsKitten
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You HAVE to update soon!!!!

It's a must!

And I would love you forever!
person rubberduck
schedule October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what a world! how could this happen to katie? that billie sure is a wicked witch. and here i thought her plan was only the article in the paper. how you ted ted things to more diabolical levels. way to go. lol i really like how mcgonagall and snape bantered while they were waiting for katie in the common room. that was cal. al. it was pretty impressive how snape knew what was in the juice just be smelling it. what a cliffhanger. you better get the next part up fast. hehe.
person AriadneElda
schedule October 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh hell, the plot thickens and the angst rises! What will happen to Katie? I somehow feel you won
person Courtney
schedule October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Noo! Please don't tell me what I think is going to happen is true!! No...!! But anyway, keep up the good work.
person Shannon
schedule October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT!*Fal*Falls off chair* I did not see that coming at all! HOLY SHIT!! Oh the drama, that is so aweful. I look forward to the next chapter, and will most likely go insane until then. HOLY SHIT!!
person hartbreak
schedule October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is great!! but u can't leave us in a cliffy like this! u have to update soon! this is horrible, i have to kno what happens! damn, what a horrible cliffy.
person Jo
schedule October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! y?????????? Poor katie!! and on her B-day!!! :( DOnt HURT the baby!!! and PLZZZ let Katie be
OK!!!!!!!!
person Kelly
schedule October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
love it.
person AriadneElda
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I LOVED this little backstory of Adrian and Terry. It was so wonderfully well-written! So full of emotion! Simply beautiful! Thanks for writing it. Please, no matter what else you do, don